this was heart breaking

It is always nice to see some of your work posted here. And this was just such a great one-shot of what happened in your version of those events. It makes me so happy to see this.

Wooo! So glad to see you getting back into your stories! Hope that you get back into the swing of things and keep it going. I love reading your FNAF stuff. :3

You didn't follow the canon, if you playing Five Nights at Freddy's 4, you should follow the canon and understanding now. You must know that Foxy or Mangle didn't cause the Bite of '87, it was accident at Fredbear's Family Diner.

Oh, you're back. Normally, I would most probably write a long meaningful review, but now I've got nothing. Really. I don't know what to say. God, was that depressing...

Aah, a nice return to the sources. Very nice ! Glad to hear the creative juices are flowing again ! Looking forward to what's coming :P

Damn, I feel so bad for the animatronics, and I'm kind of disturbed that I don't feel bad for the guy who got bitten. Regardless, this has given me a serious case of nostalgia, and I think I'm gonna go reread JANaF after I finish typing this. :)

Great story, but have you ever considered going into multiple story universes?

*Sigh* I felt kinda depressed reading this... But I was supposed to be. This is labeled as tragedy for a reason after all. Though since I'd already read the original stories, I know things got better for them.

However, What REALLY depressed me was Just Another Night at Fazbear's Fright. Just the premise alone. Everyone's Hard efforts being for naught, the Pizzeria being forced to be closed off and sold anyway, and the worst part was the FazBots being SCRAPPED, even though they were known to be SENTIENT... Ugh. All thanks to some twat with a camera.

That last part scares me. The Fazbots were fully sentient, and yet they weren't even given the Choice to Live or Die! All I got was Adrianna calling Mitch's Junkyard and I already knew that'd be the last we'd see of our beloved characters outside of Flashbacks. Chapter Six of JANFF confirmed it, since Mike thinks of them in flamin' passing! I HATED that part! What made it worst was knowing how child-like Chica and Bonnie were and knowing their ultimate fate! The flashbacks just depressed me after that... Knowing that they were destroyed AND likely still Functional when they were TORN APART AND INCINERATED.

The bite. Ouch.