this is a great story i hope that you continue it but i cant read chapters 4 and 5

These last two chapters appear really weird on my screen, like lines of code running through them.

First of all, I like where this is headed for Nat and Bucky :) Totally want some more memories for them. :)

The reason why I answer to this chapter here instead of the newest one is the German you put in here XD I was always so happy when people offered me help with languages in my fanfics that I needed to google translate. They sound terrible to the native speaker XD Most of what you have is correct, but it's a little mixed up.

"Halt. Ich muss mich ausruhen."

"Wenn Sie jetzt eine Pause einlegen, werden wir den Treffpunkt nie erreichen." sounds better than what you had before. I tiny tiny bit more slang into it, to roughen it up. The other one is correct, but "stop" has different translations in German as it seems. It can be the about stopping to run, to do something, to rest (which this one was and you need another word there.)

and that "Ich muss aufhören!" sounds very weird in this context XD I know what you want to say and it sounds logical in English but the translation doesn't XD
Use something like: "Einen Augenblick nur!" (Just a moment!)
that works best I think.

if you ever need something, you can contact me. I should usually see it within a day :)

oh and the next two chapters, i think ffnet totally screwed them up. They have all that 0px font format stuff around them. just check the Doc Manager file if you see the same flaws. just copy and paste it again and then replace/update the chapter.

I hope you read this and as I said, I offer my help with the German translations. I only recently found a friend who does the Russian translations for me and I was so embarrassed by what google translator had given me XD

This story is great, love how you got the characters spot on. However you need to reupload chapters 4/5 as its too hard to read.

Can you please fix chapter's 4&5 please.

This is a pretty good story but chapters 4&5 need to be reposted

Hey there ~
For so far I really like your story. It's interessting and I love to see how it will work out in the end.
Sadly the last to chapters were vry difficult to read because of all those html like stuff that's everywhere, even breaking sentences so it's hard to see where you have to continue readimg.
I would be happy to read more of tnis.
Have a nice day :3