| Reviews for Book One: Dawn of a New Age |
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Archivest Grim chapter 14 . 6/10 Thank you mate for being a great writer and making such a great story, I hope work on this story is going well for you lad and hope you are having an amazing day |
Reader chapter 14 . 1/4 Do what you want with your fics, by my $0.02 on moving to Spacebattles is that's foolish. |
Hamilton406 chapter 2 . 1/4 Cutter goes against UNSC protocol and gives Aliens coordinates to UNSC controlled space. Yea he’s fucked if ONI found out. Plus he broke Cole Protocol where he isn’t supposed to give any UNSC info at all and destroy it if no other option. The whole Citadel meeting goes against everything. Sure he brought help but he doesn’t know if the council is just being that way before they find out where they are from and attack. And that is why he’ll be fucked over by UNSC command |
ThePhenakism chapter 14 . 1/3 Disappointing to see the story now abandoned, but wondering if you will still keep it on ffnet as well ? |
Crystal chapter 13 . 11/11/2019 This chapter was really good and enjoyable and I can see we’re getting closer to the halo story I think that will be a good plot for this story and I you continue to write it |
Blaze1992 chapter 13 . 8/1/2019 Well it's interesting but I think the mysterious figure is either a self or OC insert that has tech/powers to transform him or herself into other races aka bulkhead and Z. Though what happened to shepard, I thought for sure the new AI would've been EDI and she would've choose Nate to carry her? |
colbylg chapter 3 . 7/25/2019 Cool story so far. Big fan of halo & mass effect. The only problem with the halo games is they had a 30-year war with the covenant and never figured out how to make plasma weapons. |
AmanoRyo chapter 13 . 7/22/2019 Zeratul you sneaky bastard XD |
MurphysLaw89 chapter 13 . 7/20/2019 Always a pleasure to read your work. I'm sorry to hear about your problems, just know what plenty of us are or have been in similar straits. Keep hanging in there, buddy. |
I am Lauren chapter 13 . 7/14/2019 Ignore Carlos, honey. This story is doing just fine. Keep it up. |
SpawnX66 chapter 13 . 7/15/2019 Dude, I am sorry things aren't going well and I can accept that you might not be able to expand this into the series you wanted. This was a great chapter, and I do hope you at least cover the events of Halo or even finish up the Halo Wars arc. This is a very entertaining read, one of the best Halo/ME mashups I've read in a while. I hope things improve for you. |
superpierce chapter 13 . 7/15/2019 Sorry to hear that your having issues with life to many good authors I've read stopped writing because of those reasons. |
ThePhenakism chapter 13 . 7/15/2019 Nice chapter ! |
Scarease chapter 13 . 7/14/2019 I been have idea of massive cross over Halo ,Mass Effect ,Aliens ,gears of war ,Starcraft ,Crisis ,Resistance fall of man ,Borderlands ,Dead Space ,bit of Star Wars ,Avangers and others create complex and diverse universe different levels of tech and such . |
Carlosxvx chapter 12 . 7/14/2019 Spartans giving theire names to a stranger? So much bullshit. I tougth this will be good but its just getting worst, Sorry to say it but this is trash. |