enjoyed reading this! thank you for writing, you have so many collection of stories to read I’m utterly amazed!

I really wanted to finish this story, but it is just very childish. It is hard to keep up with scene changes, i.e. from sasuke and hinata to hinata's father. Plus, the plot is just flat. I was hoping for action, character development, something. I have enjoyed a few of your other stories, but this one just falls flat. Sorry.

It's "Mark my words" - as in, take note/write it down etc

"Mock my words" doesn't make any sense

Aoda does talk

last bit... omg yeasss

it is cute when you write about summons and all but you are starting to do it a little too much.

btw..sorry but this irks me..when someone gets hurt..it is "ow" not "owe"..owe is like..you owe me money or whatever.

OMG un Sasuke pervertido y celoso es problemático

me mato de risa Aoda

Amazing story and I do enjoyed reading this story.

Thank God that kono is dead and oh my God sasuke got Hinata wedding ring.

Please update.

That bastard kono poison his own father and I hope that Hinata and sasuke and Hiashi and kakashi be on their guard around that bastard Konoha. I do hope that Hinata is pregnant with sasuke' s child.

Hinata and sasuke you need to be on guard around fire lord' s son he's up to something bad.

Well done Hinata and please update .