Excellent!

If it makes for a more thoughtful and less reactionary Harry, Daphne Greengrass make have made a small effort that could have major ripple effects as time progresses. Those could be interesting to watch.

Enjoyable and could be an excellent beginning for a D/H ship story. It feels as if the end was too abrupt. Thanks for sharing it.

I know that this has been complete for AGES, but it would be nice to see more of Daphne's interations (such as a continuation?). This was intriguing . . .

One shots don't get a lot of reviews nor reads, but this one desires both. It's a great and logical premise. I enjoyed it and it would make a fine start to a H/D ship story. Thanks.

Very good.
A new and different idea about GOF.
Thanks for writing.

Nice story, good use of a minor character. Thanks for sharing.

Rowling shoulda written this amazing fic & included it in Book 4.

Seems like the first chapter of a more interesting longer story. "Inner workings of the snake pit."

This was a nice read but I did not feel like it was a complete one shot. I think you need a little more to end this and then it would have been.

I know you said this is a one-shot, but I do like a good HP/DG pairing! Thank you for writing...

wow hurray u go daphane
loved it make malfoy pansy pay
please do continue
bye sumi

Great job! And to think Daphne turns out to be Malfoy's sister-in-law.

Too bad this isn't two chapters so you could let us in how Daphne gets her revenge on Pansy.