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Awww what a lovely way to end this chapter I liked the slight humor and fluffiness added at the end

How do the chapters somehow always end up both heartbreaking and heartwarming?

"H-He smiled at me when I improved and sometimes I couldn't help, but feel like those smiles were meant for you."
Just rip my heart out would you

*singing at the top of my lungs* AND THE TEARS STREAM DOWN MY FAAAAACE~~

IF WE COULD ONLY HAVE THIS LIFE FOR ONE MORE DAY IF WE COULD ONLY TUUUUUEN BACK TIIIIIIMMME

That last sentence killed me

I never thought I'd like Kisame but here I am so thank you

ITS MOURNING NOT MOANING! lol

Hello! I know you probably might not read this, but first of all, your story is amazing and I love it so much. I've noticed that you use the incorrect form of "where" at times and I would like to show you the proper way.
1)where: present tense of a location (ex. Where is the girl?)
2) were: past tense of a location (ex. We were at the store)
3) we're: we are. The "a" in are ends up becoming an apostrophe (ex. We're going to the police).
Note. "Were" is the only one pronounced differently, while "where" and "we're" are pronounced the same

Well I enjoyed the story and the length of the story but I can’t say I was satisfied with the ending. It seemed a bit rushed, it also seemed as if it wasn’t the actual ending but it will have to do. Many fan fic writers never get this far so I’m glad I was able to get some sort of ending to a great story. Even with the misspelling and such it wasn’t hard to find the appropriate word and continue reading.

love this fic despite many spelling and grammar errors. first fic to manage to make me kinda sad tbh lol. when you write another one let me kno if u need a beta! xoxo

So.

This story has SO much potential. But you REALLY need a beta to clean it up. Sentences are confusing, different names are being used at random, and SO many Bone Apple Teas. I'm amazed I stuck around to the end, 'cause usually I bail out of frustration. They say Awful Idea Great Execution, but this is a reverse- Great Idea Poor Execution.

The best of luck, and don't let this hold you back! Learn, and progress! I can see so much potential!

this was awesome, i never thought id ever like a sasuke x hinata fic. my only complaint was the grammar hope you had a beta read it for corrections but other than that it was wonderful

well then

aww