Reviews for Part Two of In the World of Prisoners
Ikoter chapter 2 . 6/2/2016
So... It has not yet ended? I was sure this chapter would be the end.

You went through the agony of writing a 15k word chapter, with so many damn grammar mistakes, that brought out more questions than answers. I have no fukkin clue where the battle took place, how many spells any mage could have casted during the battle, how many troops there actually were, and Emperor forbid if I know what the hell happened to Maydonna after all of that.

I still have to deschiper how the hell would the one headed hydra mother just LEAVE its babies with an unknown. That is something that no animal would do willingly. Under no circumstance!

The battle was so chaotic...
Ikoter chapter 1 . 5/19/2016
So is the elf dead? You've failed to clarify this.