If only tony knew about the march irl apocalypse thats still ongoing

Gotta say stark's first line after being told peter got crushed by a building is close to mine during my first viewing of homecoming '' what the hell ''

I really like Shuri in this, she was a great character. I love how you wrote her

Love the snarky banter! Especially Coulson s opening line. I don’t understand all the happy hate though. I’ve always liked him in the series. But I really loved how you handle this chapter. Just had to stop and review

I like this actual face to face conversation. May was always a badass. I like the concept of her acclimating him, actually been working on a story focused on that for several months now. Mainly would record thought and am just now typing it out.

However, strange as it is, it’s really weird for me to read actual third person narration. I’m so used to the texting! I will say, that is credited to your ability as a writer that you could make a non-traditional format seem normal and regular writing seem foreign! And I am a huge reader, so that’s saying something.

This was just your longest narration chapter yet, so it’s the first time it really stuck with me. Didn’t think I would like a story primarily told through texts, but brava!

Haven’t reviewed in a while, but I had to on this chapter. And that is purely because of Tony’s email and words about Coulson. That was absolutely fantastic and I can hear that as being a big epic Tonys/avengers hero speech. I think that was important for Peter to hear.

Main reason I have not reviewed for a while, the characters have kind of become a bit out of character in my opinion. I started off pretty grounded, but I am not buying some of what they are saying to each other and some over reactions in my opinion. However, you still write very well and this is a very entertaining story. Hence, I am still with you on chapter 74 and will be with you till the very end! I just believe in telling people the good and the bad. I was going to disappear, but I had to let you know about the Coulson speech. I was going to wait until the end of the story to leave a final review.

BYW, LOVE Steve’s artwork. Especially appreciate the warnings when it’s not work safe. I started on FFN first and that is why all my reviews are here. I am excited to see how this story progresses.

JaGiaC

I think this may be my favorite chapter. I love the text message conversations between the various avengers (mainly Clint, Laura, and of course our main characters) and the conversations with Friday. I also loved your bit of pros in there with Clint.

Thank you! I got this weird thing about grammar, and you not capitalizing the entirety of “Captain Tight Pants” was bugging me in previous chapters. And I’m glad you are including Peggy in this. I absolutely loved her I was so sad when they canceled her TV show. She was a kick ass character. I also loved Steve and Tony’s parting exchange at the end of this

Hahaha, too funny. Although the hole “red phone” “blue phone” it was confusing. As I’m typing this review, I realize you’re probably referring to their uniform colors. I actually re-watched that ending scene to see if Tony got a red phone (I think it was actually black). I did enjoy this, I watched the first couple of seasons of agents of shield, but then fell out of it. I always wanted to go back and by then it was so far into it I would never of been able to catch up. That may be some thing I need to look into again. The only unbelievable part of the story is Tony Stark passing out with a 0.2 BAC level. That is weak ass shit for a former alcoholic. Alcoholics everywhere would be very disappointed in him. I have had .3 drunks walk around with barely a stumble. Granted, as someone who rarely drinks, I would be in a coma at .2, lol.

Just saw the story and some of your others, I am really looking forward to reading the rest of them.

Ohh that was good cannot wait for the sequel

Aaaah it has begun! I'm so excited! Can't wait for February!

Great chapter, please don't hurt Clint or Bucky.

Isn’t Wanda some sort of teenager? Also what country allowed a fugitive to marry a robot?

Wanda is actually a teenager, about 15.

Cooper