Please write more.

Really glad to see an update! Good that Luke and Lorelai are there to help run the show because Jess and Rory weren't getting anywhere on their own. Saying hurtful / mean things does not good, and they all want the best for Lori. Well, guess the loud voices got the attention of sleeping Lori and Jonas - so, they (the adults!) MUST make this better. And, I have hope for Jess and Rory - I am hoping that they learn to trust each other again, and they each realize how much they still love each other. (Leave Logan the pompous somewhere where rich arrogant people go to live.) Just saying, but it is your story. Thanks more soon please.

Never thought i would b team jess on anything but i am! I dont care how heartbroken rory was! You dont hide something like that! Goes for luke too! He should have told him rorys feelings b damned! I hate the way lori found out though. Still, rory shouldnt get to call the shots! I hate the fact that they will most likely end up together by the end of this. I couldnt forgive that if it was me.

Oh lord it’s Caesar/ Cesar not Seizer. Ever heard of Julius Caesar or Caesar salad? Other then that fact, I’m enjoying the story.

Great chapter. Funny to see all the townspeople starring at them while eating ice cream. I like how this story is going. Please continue it.

I read this whole piece and although your writing is fine, your geography is ridiculous. Yale is 22.8 miles from Stars Hollow. There are no planes from New Haven to Hartford because the drive is an hour or less. Two, no book tour is going to start in Stars Hollow. Hartford, maybe, but otherwise it’s ridiculous. Also, Rory in this - is an awful mother. She denied her daughter a father because she didn’t want to share. None of the excuses that she or Lorelai or Luke give hold weight. And Logan from the series is NEVER going to date a single mom. He and Rory spent most of their time together drinking and partying. You can’t do that while raising a small child on your own. Finally, I sincerely hope Jess gets an attorney challenges Rory for custody and takes Lori away from Rory. I know you won’t do that, but honestly, it’s what she deserves.

Jess and his daughter get along well. And, sorry to say, but I am not surprised the townies are standing outside and watching. Then, Logan, just, . . . yuck! Rory has accomplished a lot, but so has Jess. I like "adultier adults" - it is clear. Thanks. More soon please.

Jess' paternal instincts sure kicked in. I liked how the scene from the ice cream parlour mirrored Luke's with April in the diner, with everyone watching them. I was thinking how similar they were but gen realized everyone would have reached the same way. Stars hollow is nosy.

Don't like Logan.

After reading Luke's reason, I forgive him for not telling Jess.

ummmmm what yyyyyyyyy logan?

Poor Luke - kind of caught I the middle. Lori and Jess are already great friends. Ick, Logan the pompous? That is just terrible. Finally, Rory took a stand and Jess gets Lori for the evening. It is posted as Jess and Rory - I am banking on that. Thanks. More soon please.

Wow! Logans the fiance? Should have guessed! Lori seems to like him so thats good. Am curious to see if he will b sticking around. It would b sort of different if you kept rory and logan together instead of the usual happily ever after where she would end up with jess. But its your story so i will go with it. I sort of think rory should have canceled her date as there are more important things to worry about. Update soon!

And the hits just keep on coming...

Lorelai was helpful and understands his hurt and pain. Rory - picking up her fiancé and Jess has a 6 AM flight. Don't know if Jess will have any alone time to Rory to talk or not. He is in pain. More soon please.