Guess who's crying?
Me.
Whooo!
I would have loved another chapter, maybe a bit more closure, but WHOOOOO that was very very depressing but very well written.
Great story!

I wanted to let you know that I just finished reading through this entire story and I loved it. I hadn't seen NCIS in a while, the last episode I really saw was Ziva's last. I found myself thinking recently "What even happened in that episode?" because the whole I remember confused me a lot, I think maybe I accidentally skipped the episode before it or something. I don't know. Anyway I decided to do a quick google search to have it quickly summed up for me what ever happened to Ziva...and boy that was a rollercoaster of emotions.
Google's little summary they made me from wikipedia went like this:

"Ziva became a NCIS agent and was sworn in as US citizen. It is discovered that she has a daughter..."
And I'm like... She did? I don't remember that plot line. I guess maybe I do. it's been a while. Okay.

"..With Anthony Dinozzo"
At this point I'm like totally lost. i saw her leave the show. What? I keep reading.

"During a mortar attack Ziva is killed"

rollercoaster of emotions. I decided to look into and yes low and behold Tony's last episode (which I had heard of but never seen) includes mentions of Ziva! ...but she dies? That seemed totally ridiculous for a character who left the show years ago! And of course she dies off screen! I decided to check the episode out, only after I found this story so i could have it on stand by for when I finished is so I could have some head cannon to believe in.

I didn't dislike the episode honestly, though i will never forgive them for killing Ziva. Tony's acting was amaZing and I kept wishing that she would show up at the end and make it a good episode.

I am in love with your story. it was fantastic and perfect and I loved the cyptic moments and the clues and the mystery and the search for Ziva. It's exactly what she deserves, to be found, to be happy. And this is the ending they both should've gotten. You are amazing for writing this! It was so nicely written and better then the reality. Thank you for sharing!

Please write an epilogue!

pleasewrite another story like this thanks

This is a great piece of work and should have been the proper finale for the Tiva TV ending, however,
This story deserves an epilogue, please consider this. Well done!

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obrigada por dar um final feliz a esses dois . adorei a historia ...

Just finished rereading. Stupendous! Please write more. Tiva forever.

I'm only on chapter 3 yet and I can't wait to read more! Greatly written, completely true to the characters, way more satisfying than the show itself as far as the ending was concerned. Love it!

Beautiful reunion - it was written perfectly and so in-character for both of them. It was a pleasure to read this story. :) I hope you can write an epilogue, too - I'd love to read it!

Yes, he and Ziva and Tali found each other again! :) Super excited for the next chapter!

Oh, Tony...I hurt for him but I'm glad he has Tali. His interactions with her are both adorable and beautiful. :)

Yay, he discovered the truth! :) Love this story and your writing so far! :)

Ziva is smart. She knew Tony would look there and it's the perfect place to hide information. Why doesn't Tony believe that she's alive? Is it because he doesn't want to get his hopes up? Awesome chapter! :)

Wow, Orli told Tony everything he needs to know without actually saying anything...and Ziva is still alive! :) I'm looking forward to the next chapter!