I totally love the way you wrote this! It was fantastic!

This is a beautiful story! I loved the way you wrote it from Janes POV. Lovely words!

I really enjoyed it, so lovely and sweet! Thank you very much for sharing with us.

So delicate and beautiful! Great job!

This is beautiful! You need to write more :D
Preferably rizzles stories. You wrote this in a way that I ended up falling in love with Maura.

damn lovely, thank you for posting. :)

Lovely story. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing!

Thanks for sharing this wonderful fic. I really enjoyed it!

Great piece! Looks like this is your first fic, so I wanted to be sure to leave a note of encouragement! Thanks for sharing your work!

Such a sweet and wonderful story. If it is not too much to ask for, could you maybe,uh just maybe, write a companion piece of this with Maura's POV? Hehe it would be great to know her side of the story. Nevertheless, this is a beautiful story. You are a good writer too! :)

Omg what a lovely read keep up the good work

Finally...something I had been looking for quite a few days...it's it's tear-jerkingly beautiful...:)
Thank you so so so much for this one...

This is great, its raw, great growth, original. Thanks heaps for sharing

That was lovely.

the cat gets the cream eventually lol