Consider updating this, please. It's really great writing.

The paint metaphor as a before-and-after, where the demarcation is always visible and tangible is really excellent. You work with contrast so well...lack of privacy vs. being horrifically alone, cold and hot, Kurt's obliviousness vs. Elliot's vigilance, numbness vs. agony...and how BOTH sides of those polarities are intolerable to her in the moment...it's SUCH smart writing, and it establishes her as adrift in the aftermath very effectively.

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Oh my goodness, that was so beautifully written. Your use of symbolism and metaphor compliment your readable style and rich use of vocabulary. So true to Liv. You really got inside her head. Excellent job.

I absolutely love your way of writing stories and character's thoughts/feelings. There are a lot of fics about Sealview but yours is really well written. Please continue like that it's great!

I already don't like this Kurt guy, he's too demanding, I feel like he raped her emotionally by just taking her straight to bed. She needs to get rid of him.

Awesome story. So dark.

I'm glad you updated this! Looking forward to chapter 3!

Update please
Great chapter
Please update soon!

Wow. This is really good writing. A horrible thing happened to Liv and you're really capturinf the emotion and sense of loss and the pain

This is so good. I'm not sure how I missed this story! Very well written

This is really, really great. Definitely one of the best post Undercover figs I've read. Good work!

Oh god. This is probably the most intense post-Sealview fic I've ever read. Your style of writing is amazing and Olivia's pain is almost palpable. I think my favorite part is when Fin looks over Liv's shoulder and comments on what she's written in her report - it's so incredibly authentic!

I've always wanted to know what happens after this ep. Your story was perfect! Now I just need to know what happens next chapter, and the next, and the next...

Great