I love this little short story! I see you used the same Kjekk in this story that I found in the Daughters of Arendelle. I loved how it connects in that way.

Well, now I want to know all about this snowball incident in the kitchen yesterday! And how Elsa will go about mucking out the stables as punishment.

This was loads of fun. I bet these two would've been a handful and a lot of fun if the accident never occured.

You should write up some more stories in this AU.

LOVED!
THIS!
SO!
MUCH!

Aww I loved it. That was so cute, and the sword fighting scene was so funny. I like to read these kind of fanfictions and imagine what it would be like if Anna and Elsa hadn't been separated.

Incredibly adorable story, I really love it!

Good story, good characterization and I like the people as you write them. The play fight seems a bit youngish for a 13 and 16 yo though although it was fun to read. I would expect there would be a bit more friction between Elsa and her mother as a mid-teen but it is sweet that they are still getting along. The sisters being close is expected. I enjoyed the story.

This is perfect - characterization so, mood, action, everything. Oh, what might have been.

Should be K rated

Oh man that was sooo cute. And such a wonderful alternative to the one Agdar chose from not asking for GrandPabbie to explain himself better! Well done!

I love this story! Bravo!