Very trash many oc

Yunyun a cute

Very nice.

It shows limited, though extant levels of potential so far. One thing that bothered me enough that i actually went into a little research binge until I went to look for the actual quote. For reference, it's the reference on Buddha, which i misread as a character reverence to Buddhism. That one word derailed me for half an hour.

Now, limited potential, you might ask. It's not that the story has a ceiling for promise, so much as Nasuverse is, well, in as many words, bullshit. It manages to be more stupid than a comic book, and less consistent. For 'magic' the world is too technical to bullshit details, and if you somehow get it right, no sane person would find the scene as having made sense. Why? Because, the world's mechanics are bullshit already, so an accurate portrait of the system is still bullshit.

I'm holding out hope, for now, though. Sorry for the strange feedback.

what did i just read? i need more to understand

Interesting enough so far. I'll give it a follow until I can see more how Yunyun fits into either side of the crossover. Anyway, nice action at least. And Yunyun is interesting to read in a perpetually-down-on-her-luck type of way. Thanks for the chapter!

can you put more info in the summery or something cause honesty only reason i'm here is that i miss clicked and even then the beginning doesn't really pull you in and i can't tell if its oc or I just don't have enough info on both series (or at least nasu-verse ) but right now it's just a confusing mess to me. Basically some more info about what ur doing with this fic would be nice, i plan to follow along for now at least till you get out of the prologue stage after that well as i said first impressions aren't the best not, the worst but...you get it.

Looks like it could have been interesting. Unfortunately, it also looks like its considerably more Fate than Worm; and that a significant understanding of the Fate canon is required for reading.

Interesting.