Reviews for Harry Potter and the Game
AsTheyBurnInHell'sFlames chapter 45 . 7/24
Great fanfiction! Just wish it wasn't incomplete. Hope you haven't given up on this one, you have me waiting for an update.
Kenneth Cheung chapter 45 . 7/23
I love this book!. Will the two harries ever meet? What about hermione? will their be a future version of her too? Will the future harry tell past harry and his family everything?
Anne Bond chapter 45 . 7/20
It's so not fair! Every good fic I find here is incomplete! Concept, please update soon, I want to read on!
Is Markus Black an older Harry? How did he get the Elder Wand? Why is the older time traveling Harry wearing glasses? The younger one got contact lenses at the end of 1st year.
Have you based Madam Yao on the Ancient One from Doctor Strange?
If you haven't, I hope im not offending you...
fish chapter 45 . 7/19
I love this so much! I think this is my favorite gamer Harry fic. I love how you didn't gloss over the negative aspects of Harry's personality. I also really liked how you portrayed each character as complex, without bashing any of them. Each character's flaws and strengths seem really balanced. Also, your depiction of voldemort seems more dangerous and scary than canon voldie, and I've been enjoying the conflicts that arise from that. I can't believe Dean died! It definitely served to raise the stakes, especially since Hermione is now studying dark magic as a direct result of the basilisk catastrophe. I spent the whole Turpin trial on the edge of my seat because I knew it was possible for Harry to fail. In fact, the whole scene where he failed his protect Lockhart quest was very poignant because we haven't really seen him fail any super important quests yet. I also like that Harry put his project on hold in honor of Dean. It helped me realize that it's okay to take time to grieve. I'm sad that there's no more to read, but I really enjoyed what I did get to read, so thank you for writing this!
Guest chapter 13 . 7/18
And I’m out. Harry’s wis and int have skyrocketed compared to the start of the story. But his actions have not changed. This makes his stats pointless. He’s still just as stupid, just as prone to stupid mistakes and retarded decisions. His stats have not affected his ability to think at all. That’s garbage. I hate stupid characters. Especially if they are not supposed to be stupid. This is a huge failing on the writers part. Stupid writer stupid characters.
PaxZola chapter 1 . 7/17
This fic is one of the best I've read. You should really finish it out. I'm sure your readers are waiting eagerly for you to continue
Gyhfyuyg chapter 45 . 7/16
This story is one of the best stores I read on this site. I love how small details tie in with each other. I hope you continue this
Guest chapter 45 . 7/14
pls update this story soon its so good!
Guest chapter 24 . 7/10
Best house elf lore I’ve ever seen, thanks. I really like how you actually humanize the less used characters in the series, and how you left Ron out of the equation, at least so far, that’s something not many people can do. I’d appreciate if Seamus and his booms were a bit more common, but this is really well written.
ExS-DrIfTeRr chapter 35 . 6/26
Not a fan of Wentworth he is declaring war against this girl without any proof or reason to believe she killed him
ExS-DrIfTeRr chapter 31 . 6/26
Why doesn’t he use Observe on everyone and everything?
It’s like he forgets he has it every time it’s convenient for the writer rather than what would actually happen
Guest chapter 1 . 6/25
No tutorial then?
Kyle chapter 1 . 6/13
This fic should rightfully be called Harry Potter and the Endless Plot Holes!
Guest chapter 45 . 6/12
Updateeeeeeeeeee
jon reeve chapter 8 . 6/4
/I haven't seen the phoenix cliche in a while. I've actually only seen it used a few times. I always rather liked it, tbh. Probably because I tend to drop bad fics before they get to that part.
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