I'm crying, this was beautiful. I just realized why I love this ship, all over again.

"together,there was nothing they could not do." except best percy and annabeth

Ahhhh some Jeyna. Haven't gotten my dose of Jeyna in a while, and this sure fits there. As a whole very well written, the words flow and capture me into the setting, the environment, like any good writing should. The thoughts of each characters are also a main highlight of the story, which you aced. Additionally, I liked how you put some warming up action before the climax of the story. But it has its flaws that stained my full enjoyment. First, although it is written in quite a lot of depth, it still feels too short. I know it is easy to say this as a reader instead of a writer(I know that feeling, don't worry) the stuff you wrote wasn't one-shot material, it should've been a short story. Second, the formatting bothers me at times. You should put clear borders/markers between scenes, and some spelling and punctuation errors from time to time(recheck them!) Thirdly, the last scene didn't feel like it did its fully potential. Granted, it's touching and heartwarming, but Jason's revelation about their past in Reyna's room doesn't feel clear cut(again, it feels rushed). I just feel that there was some more potential to be unlocked in the last part. But all in all, great writing, the best one I've read in weeks, and great job. Keep it up! (Leave me a message soon! I love chatting with other similar writers, and maybe we can leave some feedback and critics to each others' works!)