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Rosajean chapter 40 . 13h I love getting notifications for updates to this story in my email! I’m enjoying it very much. So was Draco sulky because he was left alone the previous time the DA met or is something else going on? Also, I’m confused about how Harry is being portkeyed out...what was he touching for that to happen? I’m glad to see Harry actually requesting help when he sensed danger - he’s definitely growing. Can’t wait for the next update! Hope it comes soon! |
Padme.G chapter 40 . 13h OMG. |
Magsie-mags chapter 40 . 8/1 can't wait for the next update! |
BlueWater5 chapter 40 . 8/1 Nicely written portrayal of a kaleidoscope of emotions. I'm glad Draco was accepted by the DA. Was Harry stepping on the portkey? If so, how did his abductors get him to stand in just the right spot? If not, how was Harry connected to the portkey? I hope Severus has a role in his recovery. Evil cliffhanger - please update again soon! |
DarkRavie chapter 40 . 8/1 I really like this story. It's a fabulous read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter. |
rigger42 chapter 40 . 8/1 Someone needs to create a ward against involuntary portkeys... |
BrookGuitar chapter 40 . 8/1 Oh damn that’s a twist |
Melindaleo chapter 40 . 8/1 Oh, no! Gasp! Was it the new robes? Was the witch at Gladrags in on it? Where is the help Ron and Hermione promised, although I suppose they can't do anything now. Thankfully, no one is as yet aware of Harry's stronger magic, so I hope he can get out of this okay. I enjoyed the conversation with Snape at the beginning. I wish Snape had taken more responsibility for his own Death Eater days and the crimes he committed whilst amongst them. I really don't believe had Voldemort gone after Neville instead that Snape would've ever left Voldemort, and I'd like to see him owning up to it before he's granted forgiveness. I do like to see Harry slowly coming around to having a mentor. While I understand his reticence, asking for advice in finding a home is a very good place to start. As always, even though a lot of your focus is on characters who really don't appeal to me, I really enjoy the way you're weaving the tale. Well done! As for Dorko, I still hope one of the DA hexes him ;) |
AgosDelGrosso chapter 40 . 8/1 oh shit. I didn't see that one coming! |
Stuck.in.Wonderland.8510 chapter 40 . 8/1 OMG! So terrible. You left me with such a cliffhanger! Why have you done this!? It's a great story and one of my favs...I wanna know what happens. Please update soon! Like tomorrow? Please? |
pammiez x3 chapter 40 . 8/1 Oh Harry, always walking into danger! This certainly doesn't look good, don't keep us waiting too long! |
MinervaMcGee chapter 39 . 7/18 Wow, and owww! |
ulktante chapter 39 . 7/16 Extra Kudos! |
Sofie chapter 39 . 7/13 OH MY GOODNESS! This was a BEAUTIFUL chapter. I love the complexity of the characters and what a beautiful ending, I cried a little bit! I can’t WAIT for the next update! |
Hpnerddd chapter 39 . 7/15 I always look forward to this story. You have developed your characters so fluidly, and the storyline makes me want more. Thank you for updating, I can’t wait for the next one! |