I love the dynamic you’ve set up here! I love how reluctant Danny is to have anything to do with the magical world, and I love that he only agrees to go once his sister is allowed Hogwarts protection. I love how he’s barely given any time to grieve his Fenton family before being told he has a Potter family and an obligation to join that family; and I love how this sets him up for conflict right off the bat. I love how you firmly establish him as a Fenton, when everyone expects him to be a Potter. This story is golden!

I would love to see how Danny’s dynamic with the residents of Hogwarts changes as he’s forced to take classes with his fellow Gryffindors. How Harry takes having a brother suddenly return to him, only for that brother to not even talk to him. How Jazz navigates learning magic and magical culture through the context of the library, despite being a no maj. How Danny navigates being both a Fenton and a Potter, and everything that comes with it, whether he wants it to or not. I don’t think I could write it well enough to do it justice, and I have no clue if you intend to continue this at some point. But if you do, I would love to read it!

Whether or not you continue this story, thank you for writing this, and for putting it in a place where I could find it!

OMG! Continue! This story has so much potential!

I know it's been a long time since you wrote this one shot, but I really hope you would consider writing a sequel or making this into a longer story. The concept is so interesting and i'd love to see the interactions between Danny and Harry as well as the rest of the students and teachers. Especially once they find out about his ghost powers.

Awesome writing. Thanks for spending time on this *thumbs up*

I adore this. I really, really adored this and Danny’s stubbornness to meet his long lost brother.

A shame you never did anything with this. Could have been quite interesting.

FAN!~

wish there was more but loved it anyway

more chaps ;w;

I have read every one of your tics and I wish they were longer lol they are really good I totally agree about Danny being smart it just doesn't show it because he is never in class enough to actually know what they are talking about (or he's asleep) either way I hope you write more they are awesome

Great story! Not really feeling like a one-shot with so much potential, though. Would love to read more. Only thing is the 2 grammar mistakes of "her and" instead of "she and", which throws the narration off a bit for me. Otherwise love it and would be interested in seeing what happens.

Ok 2 things 1 I just read all you fics and they are all great and 2 could u do a DP/Death Note or a DP/Merlin crossover(or both )

Mmmoooorrrrrreeeee

i looooooved this

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