Hey ! I am having a tremendous time reading this, and Hannibal's characterisation is so good. It fits the show and what Mads Mikkelsen had made of it.
Oliveah (never saw it with this spelling, but it works nicely) is also a multi dimensional character that I appreciate.
For the record, Lyon was capital of Rhone Alpes until very recently where Auvergne was kinda conglomerated to make a bigger region. So at the time of this conversation, it still would be the historical Rhône-Alpes. It is a great city, I was born and raised there. Really worth visiting, good choice Oliveah :)

I envision her as Kate Mara.

hehehehe love confession from poor Will

Beautifully written, revisiting the story :)

Oliveah holier than thou Attitude toward Chilton is overdone. She’s disgusted by his actions but not by Hannibal’s? Why did she felt empowered by telling him his survival was a mistake? And Chilton would be her first kill? Really? Everything she should feel about Hannibal she projects it toward Chilton and Lounds... is it because Hannibal is sleeping with her? Her reaction toward Will’s warning and his concern for her well being was over dramatic and very annoying. She has less than a month to find place to live along with a job to support herself...with everything she’s been through you’d think she’d be a lot more mature, but she’s acting like a love struck teenager. Why is she constantly “spatting” at people? She’s always starving. You’re not going to get hunger pains by going a few hours without eating. I honestly don’t know why Hannibal sees in her(besides accepting him for who he is) She’s not very interesting and behaves like a spoiled brat. 26 long chapters in and there’s no character development with her. And Will is in love with her? He saw her a total of 10 times maybe at that. I don’t mean to come off as rude and flaming, it’s just that Oliveah is coming off as a major boring Mary Sue.

I well say this I freaking love Hannibal Lecter possessive Nature damn I would puck him even so well hot buut Hannibal is hottet and sexier damn I can't wait to see what happen in part two

This look so interesting I'mma save number two and hope soon your update it anyway love it

I found this today and I could not stop reading! I absolutely loved this, I'm going to start reading the sequal now.

Oh how horrible and dramatic! God I hope she doesn't lose the baby :'(
Please tell me Hannibal isn' t gonna be playing house with that awful Bedelia! :D I loathe her character so much! Kudos to G. Anderson tho for portraying her in the show, I'm a rather peaceful person, but damn that awful woman always pissed me off :D
Can't wait for part 2, this is one of my all time fave fanfics and it's really exciting!

That was a great final-chapter, it was so thrilling.
That will happen to Oliveah? Will she loose her child? What will Hannibal do.
I can hardly wait for Part 2.

Omg just wow, what a chapter, a part of me just really wished that Olivia just went with Hannibal she knew her past and what she’s done like why even think that Will will be able to help her just ughhh but can’t wait for part 2
You’ve done a amazing job with this, thank you for uploading such a great story.

I can't believe we've already reached the end of part one. This is honestly the most well written fanfiction I've ever read. You're an incredibly talented writer and I can't wait for part two.

I can’t believe it ended just like that... :0 with a CLIFFHANGER! Always with the cliffhangers! )o( \( o )/
I loved it, even though it riled me up a bit at the end. I can’t wait for part 2. I’m looking forward to it! :)

Oh, reached the end! What a ride it has been, your story is amazing and has kept me entertained for many evenings now! Can't wait what happens next! I hope everythings ok with the little Lecter baby, I always root for them in these fics lol :D I find the idea of HL being a father awfully adorable :D

Sweet jesus! Poor Andrew...

But, that was good!