| Reviews for The Secret Magic :2: Uncontrollable |
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   Daine from Snowdale chapter 23 . 9/7/2015 If you don't get numair to do something and bring back Daine by the end of the story i WILL kill you. |
| Daine from Snowdale chapter 17 . 9/7/2015 Ahh the famous wonderful book this one sounds good but i prefer Daines wonderful book |
| Daine from Snowdale chapter 7 . 9/6/2015 i love it i HATE bullies and i've never been bullied in my life! |
| Daine from Snowdale chapter 4 . 9/6/2015 wow i think that with your a/n i am a lot! like you i may love my mum but i - like you - will always get cheered up by my dads smash-the-spider game. this is really cute so far, i love it. FYI: You spell Cartharki wrong. :) |
| Lacrymose chapter 30 . 2/20/2009 NO! |
| Lacrymose chapter 13 . 2/20/2009 offall awful from awfully. love your work. |
| Orohippus chapter 30 . 3/25/2007 You didn'y kill Jade. I have logical proof. First of all, she's the main character. Also, The Secret Magic isn't over yet. So, how can you kill the main character inthe middle of the story? You can't. It just doesn't work. I must conclude, that Numair is in for a shock when his daughter reappears, supposedly back from the dead. |
| Orohippus chapter 24 . 3/25/2007 You're still evil |
| Orohippus chapter 21 . 3/25/2007 Death to you! I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND KILL YOU UNTIL YOU ARE VERY VERY EXTREMELY DEAD. DEATH TO THE EVIL ONE! mAY YOUR COMPUTER BLOW UP IN YOUR FACE. |
| Orohippus chapter 20 . 3/25/2007 Numair isn't from Carthak. He only studied at the university there. |
| Orohippus chapter 17 . 3/25/2007 Green Lady. |
| Orohippus chapter 13 . 3/25/2007 GA! CARTHAKI! |
| Meh chapter 6 . 7/22/2006 Love the story, LOVE it. But, Daine is from Galla. I just checked the first in the Immortals. :P Otherwise, perfict, I love you style, keep it comeing |
| emmalineoftrebond chapter 23 . 7/3/2005 HOW COLD U BE SO EVIL! why couldnt numair die instead of daine? why? i dont think i'll even finish this story now. it'm making me depressed!... |
| Britters25 chapter 30 . 7/15/2004 Interesting end to the story. I can't say that I'm at all happy about it, but then again I guess I should just read what happens next... Keep up the excellent writing |
