I love thw story and the plot is great!

I like negan more than daryl... I love that you write negan ffs..

What a strange turn.

this was an extravagant read. binge-read the entire thing within a few hours as promised in my previous review. it was absolutely fabulous and so fucking twisted that i could myself feel tully's emotions. how broken, torn, lost and vulnerable she became throughout this entire read. she went through a lot- too much if you ask me- but all of her loss made such a great read, as terrible as it sounds. i feel as if her parting with negan was so bittersweet that it conflicted me as much as it did her. this was absolutely magnificent. beautiful writing, beautiful characters and beautiful tragedy. i really do hope that one day you find the muse to create a sequel to this, because i can only imagine the almighty hell that will reign if tully is discovered with rick's group. not to mention the conflict that it would cause negan as well as tully. once again, thank you for this incredible writing. i am so sad to have it end, but it came to such a pleasing conclusion that i really cannot complain. best wishes :)

absolutely loving this fanfiction. i have fallen in love with your OC, tully. she is a very complex, interesting and unique character that i for one really find myself sympathizing and rooting for. she's incredibly brave and selfless- taking on not only one but THREE children in an apocalypse (who arent even her OWN) is by far one of the most stupid things someone can do (i mean this in the best way possible, trust me) and by showing that she would do something so dangerous and fearless really speaks paragraphs about who she is as a person. she seems to be one of the only people left in this world who values the innocence of children to the extent that most did in the world before and i really admire that about her. she even puts herself on the line when carly steals from negan and that takes guts! *nudgenudge* i think that she is an outstanding character and i cannot wait to see how her and negan's relationship unfolds. thank god i am on spring break cause i am most definitely binging this story tonight!

I had binged read this story. And I freaking enjoyed it. From start to finish, this story has been very enjoyable. I don't mind the ending either, I liked that she had the courage to walk away from him for the sake of her child. However there is something that has been bothering me while reading towards the end of the story. I understand how Tully was falling for and fell in love with Negan, but at the same time she didn't want to. If I remember correctly,Tully had killed a previous leader in a group she was in. She herself killed the man for raping her sister and killing her mother. And the thing that bothered me in the story, when Negan killed a man for raping a woman and she was furious at him for that especially because her daughter witness that. I don't think it was fair for her to get angry at him for that, and also unfair that was the ultimate reason for her leaving. She felt like he was dangerous I understand but at the same time I dunno. To me I feel that is inconsistent and hypocritical because she done the same thing. I think she should've tried to understand him especially because a part of her loves Negan. There should've been a better reason for her leaving. it's like she forgot herself that she killed another, regardless of the reason. I remember she did mention her killing someone but she never tried to understand his reason. The OC at times felt inconsistent. Like she would make excuses for him at time and other would just be furious at him. But I'm just critiquing your story, not trying to be negative. But all in all the story was great, just felt weak towards the middle and especially the end. but I'm happy that Tully found what she was looking for in the end for her daughter.

It was a great story, with a great end. I hope you continue writing, you're stories are great.

I used to have a quizilla account, what I did when I had writers block was re-watch movies or episodes of the characters I was writing about. It worked for me. I hope this helps you with any future writers block you may have. Anyways, I loved the ending. I thought it was fit for the story. I completely agree with what you said about how a person should always put their child(s) needs before their own. I've followed it just in case you would like to have a sequel. Keep up the great work. I love Negan, and will be reading your other Negan story. There's always something about loving the most hated character in TV shows and movies.

This is what stupid does.

Oh my god. Did she really just do that? Her girls were safe for once. Perhaps under a less-than-moral leader but there could be worse things. She has to know that.

What. She is refusing to allow her kids unlimited food, health, etc. because of women's studies! The common sense is not strong in this one.

What the fuck...I have to admit that is very selfish of her. "Oh no, my kids- buh my feminism agenda first!"

This story was great, not every story has a happy ending, and it keeps people guessing until the very end. I've had writers block all year and I think the only way to get over it is leave it, go read some other story's, look at your own experiences as a story, then read over whatever story you were trying to write.

Omg can you please start a sequel to this? This is amazing and the way you left the story off, it's like it is begging for a sequel. I love your style and works, so please keep up the great work!

Dude, this was the PERFECT way to end this story. great job and I hope there's more to come of Tully's story ;D