Hey Zero peace
this is the first time I am reading a fanfic and I made this account so I could review this and I am from Indonesia
I gotta say you are talented dude for making such a long fanfic right this from chapter 1 until now. I am stunned how someone can make such a long story for a long time and that takes a lot of creativity and when I started reading your stories seriously I can't stop reading it, I finished the whole story until now is around 4 days because it is very interesting because before I only watched the anime and believe it or not I watched the anime on august 2020 and that is the first time I know this anime and finished it only in 2 days from season 1 until 4, because of my curiosity I tried to search for continuing the story after the marriage and I found your fanfic and it blew my mind
Well I hope many more interesting stories will come along the way.
if I can make a suggestion how about you make a story about saito and louise taking a vacation around Japan with their family
I hope your next update for the story will not take too long haha.

Heyyyyyyyy ZERO Kun! I'm back again after a "long" time! (Well, shit) Maybe don't ask why I'm late this particular time... Sorry for that though... Anyways, I'm here now! So let's not wait any longer! And hey, congrats on being early for once! Although I couldn't do the same this time :(

Workload, yes. And projects, assignments and even a bunch of Online competitions on top of that. And... several little incidents. Thanks for your concern ZERO Kun. I'm fine and hopefully I'm not at high risk in catching the virus since I'm the only one in my house so far who hasn't gone out on the road even once ever since quarantine started. About the condition here... Well, I live in India. And currently, India is the third or second worst-hit nation by the Pandemic so... Yeah, it's pretty bleak here. But the fatality rate is also rather low. So, let's hope for the best. Also I'm glad to hear that life is getting back to normal in Malaysia!

Hehe, you can bet that if this fanfic lasts four years longer, I'd still be there to greet it and you! And once again, thanks for your goodwill!
30 chapters to almost 80! Whoaa, you came a long way, ZERO Kun and there's still more to go! Does this mean that... Total of... 250 chapters or something before this fic ends?! (Correct me if I'm wrong) That's a lot! Cool! Keep it up, ZERO Kun!

It's okay! You can ask me for the spells whenever you see fit, or even if you don't need them. And I'm quite thrilled to see what kind of spells you'd make in the future! The "Mind Alternation" one was pretty amazing! Your ideas are so cool! Is there going to be a Jörmungand too?

...8 Lemons more?! *screeching in the background* HELL YEAH! LET'S THROW A CORONATION! LONG LIVE THE LEMON OVERLORD! YEAHHHHHH!
...
But seriously, so many! Do you really have a lemon tree in your garden? (Oh Saito would so so love that~) Cream, cherry, anything! Bring it! I'm ready!

Miwa-nee is gonna get married?! That's so wholesome! I'm so hyped for that chapter! Maybe the truth behind the rumour be exposed to her? *gasp* Oh! And if she comes to know about Louise's artistic skills? That'd be brilliant!

Time for the chapter review now! Oh yess!
Honestly, the title of the chapter clearly confused me. But it totally makes sense later! Saito you perv! (Not like I can blame him)
So our Hero is gaming! (That pastime my brother is occupied with every night) Putting aside the fact that you could literally write an actual battle sequence with the description of him gaming, he actually got a phone! Does Louise have one too? Well I doubt she'd want one but he did get her one and if she eventually learns how to use it... I can totally imagine her texting her husband "something" (special~) while he's out so that he'd return home quickly~ hehe.
The Wild 7 gaming session! I can never get enough of them! Takumi is a bro as ever. Meanwhile Seichi... oh well, that guy can never catch a break, heh. (Well, that's what he gets for being troublesome. I'm looking at you too, Yumi. NO GAME NO LIFE) And someone set a word limit for Aki. XD His dramatic exit made me crack up. ZERO Kun, does Takumi have several brothers? (Sweet idiot Saito, they won't leave you. Cool down!) Btw... I'm wondering... What if they all hadn't left and Louise still set up to change there~? How would Saito behave while they ask his why he's acting weird! (And Yumi and Aki getting suspicious again, hehe!) Hehem, well that doesn't need to happen. (I already love how it went.) Having someone roaring so loud that you can hear from the other room? Yep, Louise. I can totally relate.
Btw, did I mention that I had such a big secondhand embarrassment from watching Saito trying to peek? "I'm going to get changed." *flashback to those early days when he wad just a familiar to her* Of course! As if the pervert of her husband could let go of a single such opportunity!
And I... Um... Well... I dunno what to say cause this... Kyaaaa! (/ω/) (*/＼*) Ack! Well what's there to say?! He had fun alright! While nearly getting caught! (That pervert!) And sure he didn't see anything, Louise!
Third time's the charm. Welp, it seems to be rather true. He was denied that goodnight kiss and hug! Aww poor Saito! (You already took a grand view as a prize so maybe not complain for the night lol) For a moment I really thought she was gonna explode the room.
And my observation is telling me that she's doing quite good with her anger management while his keeping urges in check is going downhill hehe!
It was quite adorable, ngl. It's one of those chapters that I can read again and again for some quick fluff. I love it! And they just keep getting cuter everytime LORD HELP!

Alright, done with the chapter! I loved it! The mystery behind Delf's sight, it'll be revealed soon! It was never fully explored in the light novel or anime and with all of your clues, I'm awfully thrilled! Elves live way longer than humans so Sasha meeting other Gandálfr is an interesting possibility! We'll all be waiting for that!

ZERO Kun! I told you, don't apologise! As a regular and crazy fan and as someone who read the LN, it's my job and desire to help out, okay? About Sasha... uh.. Kuudere? Actually I'm not sure myself since I didn't observe her character traits too much. You can call her a Kuudere if she seems like one though. And her actual age wasn't clearly mentioned, it only said that she seemed to be around twenty.
Ah, so you know about their relationship, eh? Nothing was mentioned about her after the incident where she killed Brimir with Delf. So there's a lot of potential!
Huh, c'mon it's fine. I also felt that you'd want to delay that chapter so you could take your time and conpose it better. Is it the special chapter by any chance? And the spoilers, AWESOME! I'm looking forward to seeing that soon, if not on the next chapter!

That's all I wanna say. Man, all that talk about Sasha, Delf and Halkeginia's past has made me quite hyped, hehe! Your reply this time was quite longer than usual, I must admit. Mm? Heyyy, don't be sad. We'll talk again soon, kay?
Eager to see what's next.
Update again!
See ya soon ZERO Kun!
Louito4eva!

I anticipate with excitement the possibility of Saito and Louise hiking, get drenched from rainfall and dry themselves sharing a single tent. Also, thanks for the chapter! Let me just say I love how you portray Saito and Louise's married life.

"you know what mom," Saito cuts her off. "Let's WENT inside first, ...
went - go
went is used when you already did something "they went to the park yesterday".
in this case "go" would be more appropriate, since Saito is sugesting something "should we go inside?" "let's go inside"

also there is a small misspeling at the end: safe - save
nothing big

love the fic till now
it's aways good to see an after marriage FoZ story

Sup, again.

First, thank you very much for considering my suggestions, you are the man. Next, did i mention that i love the way you reply to the reviews of your fanfics, it is very amusing and also it's not cringe... okay maybe a little but i am sure everyone can let it slide.

Next, i don't know how long have you been doing this but, i like some little details that can affect the whole course of the entire fanfic or even the sequel, keep up the good work, or maybe i am just looking too much into it and it doesn't even mean anything significant at all.

Oh yeah, i truly mean it your english is really great! You must have use english language on daily basis.

Next, yeah Colbert's wish to go to saito's world, i really hope you can make it happen, maybe in the sequel or maybe even in another fanfic, i'll be waiting for it.

The last thing, NEVER pronounce my username in english it will just come out weird, i mean it was never created to be pronounced in english, it was a name i created accidentally when i was 10 or something. Just wanna point that out in case you tried to pronounce it. You know what, i think there's no point in this whole paragraph, well i just not gonna cut it because i am too lazy to do so(oh well!).

Okay, that's it for my review this time.
May the peace be with you too, my friend.

Funny chapter, it could of only been better if the game somehow tipped Louise off lol.

Just popped into my mind though. Do you prefer writing the gentleman Saito or the pervert Saito? And congrats on the new fanfic, would love to give it try after I do start and finish Ben-to! (Sorry, I'm a bit preoccupied by Kaguya-sama atm)

6. Do you prefer Canonical Couples in general, not just LouiseXSaito? How do you feel about AU Couples?

Ah shit, I missed a review on the last chapter! Sorry for not doing any review last time, the thing is that this term of college is plain busy. It's literally one assignment and quiz after another that I forgot to review the last chapter.
There is also the latest event on Honkai Impact 3rd. Good gracious, how the hell did a mobile game make me shed tears? Without spoiling anything, all I can say is that the Steins; Gate feels is in there. I was busy with it.
That and... I am now in the V-tuber hole... Hololive specifically... yeah... I'm simping for them.
Also, man... four years. This has been long huh? Many people would have moved on from doing fanfiction before they can hit the four years mark. The only other person that I know that wrote FF longer than you is Kamen Rider Chrome.
Before I make my review, the anime recommendations you gave me.
Asobi Asobase: Saw it a few times in Youtube before and I can tell it will be a hilarious experience. I will watch it with my friend at our anime watch party.
Kemurikusa: This definitely looks interesting, the premise looks pretty promising too.
A place further than the universe: Oh boy, I need to watch this, especially after Gigguk's video on this anime.
Tanya: Sorry, unfortunately, I am not interested in this anime. Something about this anime just doesn't click with me.
Alright, no need to take too much of your time now. Onto the review.
Ok, a short one for the last one. I love that chapter, the way that it built on the school chapter is a nice thing. Although, at first I was wondering why did she not just take a picture of him and then use it to do the paint. But I guess this chapter answers my question in hindsight.
Now for this chapter. I like it as a short one. Although I find it pretty hilarious Saito and his friend are playing a MOBA mobile game instead of playing gacha games or rhythm games (cuz those are very popular in Japan- be my guess-).
And then the ending. Never change Saito, never change.
Anyway, that is all I have. Sorry for the shorter review. I hope I can give one longer one next time, but for now, this is all I have. I look forward to the next chapter.
Now... how the fuck do I get out of the V-tuber hole?

You have nailed the 75th chapter with some good old-fashioned "Zero no Tsukaima" romantic comedy antics! If it was a M-rated sitcom, I would laugh my a$$ off at the awkward silences and Louise screaming "You pervert dog" as she did in the anime. So amazing! ;)

Old habits die hard with these two I suppose. Good chapter .

1. I'll look forward to the Toradora! Crossover Chapter.

2. Right.

3. Okay. Good luck and have fun watching Black Clover.

4. Sorry for bringing that up.

5. Not my original thought, but maybe explore Louise's thoughts on how she treated and abused Saito. I know you said Saito's/her family would forgive her, but perhaps Louise would think otherwise from guilt and run away until she's found by Saito and/or Asuka.

I aamm... HERE! Hey ZERO Kun, Kotano-Chan is back! Sry for the lateness again. (Lockdown's ongoing but workload isn't decreasing any soon.) At least I didn't miss another... review. Ugh, just remembering that makes me hate myself...

Anndd... I didn't forget it, Y'know? HAPPY BIRTHDAY ZERO KUN! It's 8th July today! Many many happy returns of the day! Although you don't really celebrate it, it doesn't stop me from greeting ya! I haven't really a present now... But I pray that you and your family stay safe and healthy from the Virus outbreak that's still going around! Have a nice day ahead! :D

Yesss Happy Bday to this fic too! Wait! You were only planning to make 30 chapters in the beginning? Huh... that's a shock. Had you stopped there, we may not have even met. Things change, it seems. Btw, how many chapters do you have in stock now before this ends, if I may ask? And OF COURSE, I'll be there again to greet this a 5th Anniversary too!

Yeahh, keep some of Siesta's horniness or she'd be out of character, without touching Saito ofc. Or I'mma stab her. About Manuel, it's okay lol. You gave me enough spoilers as it is anyways. Plus it's gonna be some while before we see more about him.

I'm glad that the info on their age was satisfactory to you! C'mon ZERO Kun~, what would I not do for my most fav ZNT fic of all time? (Giving it up, maybe) So don't ever be shy! You can ask me anything that you need to know. I'll try my best to help!
Btw ZERO Kun, do you ever need to know about Louise's void spells from the LN that were not in anime, in case you need to use them in the sequel or show her activating some of them in this fanfic itself? Or you're going to make your own spells? Or Tiffa's spells?

Lemons eh...? H... H- How many l-lemons do you have in stock... s-so far? D-DON'T LAUGH LIKE THAT, BAKA! Are you planning to kill me?! I just w-want to know!
Ohhhhhh yess this definitely was the hottest lemon you wrote so far! (Feline seduction is pretty killer even now tho~) But this... oh lord. Still... you've even hotter ones in stock, don't you? Don't you? Cause I don't think you till yet ever wrote any which was lesser hot than the previous! And... if you want me to be honest... I remember you telling Hellifrit-san some of your "fantasies", I would like it... if you do some of them too. (Don't look at me.) And don't miss out on adding some whipped cream in one of them~
Ooff, please don't mind me. I lost control for a bit there hehe.
(That lemon makes me feel like a sinner each time I read it...)
Hey, Lemon Overlord! It sounds nice! Do you want to be called that?

Okayyy Time for the chapter. It was a pretty long chapter huh. First thing, Saito. You. Are. So. PRECIOUS! Awwww and everything that he did for her! I'm so happy for them! Louise's dream came true at last! AND THE FLUFF! Ughhhhh...!
She loves to sketch! Tbh I didn't really think that this topic will get further expansion. I can now imagine their home being filled with Louise's paintings when they've Kids! Ufufu... Her first painting... Filled with joy and passion... followed by messed up appearance, forgetting time, FLUFF and a growling stomach! I'm sure it'll be a beautiful memory for them! Her anxiety to not show her art piece is pretty understandable and in character. (But your skills are god-level, Louise!) Btw... What was that 'reward' that she gave him~? *nudge nudge* Tell me! Wait! Don't tell me that- *gasp* We just had a steamy chapter and they're in action again?! OMG!

I always love the dinner scenes of the Hiraga family. They're funny and peaceful! Ohh Saito, I understood that you're VERY Happy for her but seriously... what happened to you?! And all of the family worked together for Louise. She's really lucky to have them, isn't she? The troublesome siblings. They're fighting again. Even a person with half-brain should be able to tell that she'd pick Saito first. What's with Asuna tho? Yeah I love her and all but... TAKE THAT! YOU'RE REJECTED! SAITO WON! BLEP!

Now time for her greatest masterpiece! Which took far more adjustment than what anyone ever imagined. Saito knows what I'm talking about, ne? I did this before to someone too but that was when they were sleeping lol. That doesn't mean that I can stay still too were I made to do so. Why are you dying from boredom, Saito? Just 'fantasize'. That's what I do... to kill time. W-What? Don't look at me like that. Lack of inspiration? Very relatable. I love the description of Miss Miwako. She seems so nice. I wish we could meet her sometime. Miwa-nee sounds adorable! (Oh no, Asuna is mad!) Ehhhh Louise? Watch what you're saying! That adorable dog is boring?! You've literally got absolutely the cutest husband you could! Oh oh, now they're- CAN YOU STOP BEING LOVEY DOVEY FOR A SECOND?! THERE'S ONLY SO MUCH MY HEART CAN BEAR! Ah she found a way to solve the issue. Watch out, Saito! The hardest part!

Derf is now here too! Yayyy I love the interaction of these three together! Sorry to bother you Derf. Yes she's changed! She's matured! Our Louise has grown! Good job Saito! Hahem, back to topic. About the pose they did next for the entire week... I... I'm speechless... H-How can you even possibly stay like... that?! For 2 hours and more?! Impressive! Spectacular! At least they got a nice cake break. (Louise getting embarrassed again lol) Glad they got to relax for a while. Before going back to- WHA! She kissed him! So cuteeeeee! And they forgot Derf! Ahhh they never learn do they? (Still they are so adorable!) Sorry Derf you're forgotten again. Hey! We were going to learn that how he sees the world! How does it work? C'mon Louito... ZERO Kun, when will we find out about it? Is it in the sequel? If yes, don't give any spoilers. Ok it's going to take only three days now. Hang on a little longer Saito! Y'know, perseverance? It'll be worth it, just hang on there. Asuna comes again! That too, without knocking! (not a good habit if it's Louito whom you are gonna interrupt, if you ask me) Duh what else can one expect of her? She actually remembered to hit him?! At least she got something to make up for it eh. Not bad. Louito have been snacking away on their first day, I see. Well they deserve it after all that effort.

It's done! FINALLY! Ahhh I wish I could see her painting in reality! I mean, who wouldn't? I absolutely adore how Louise told him to hold her hand when she shows her masterpiece to everyone. I can definitely get used to seeing this development more often. It's beautiful. And the portrait. It's... It's marvelous! A memory never forgotten. I can imagine the Wild 7 visiting them again and seeing it. Oh, how hilarious would it be! Although just a hobby... An individual can go to great lengths if they can make a hobby out their talent, can't they? And an old dream come true, I'd cry too. Hehe. I'm so happy for them. A Masterpiece of their efforts combined! With family support included!

Doneee! Whew that was long! (It often is nowadays lol) Thank you so much for your hard work!
ZERO Kun... I told you it's fine. No need for longer replies. It's just that I'm kinda impatient (chuckle) and write too much. You've to reply to many others and not to mention, the chapters you deliver. So it's okay!

Extra shovel? I wouldn't need that. I read it again and again and now I'm dead and gone to hell. So now you've been talking to my ghost! Do that resurrection of yours and bring me back to life! Otherwise I'm going to haunt you in your dreams tonight!

Oh oh! You need Sasha for your next chapter? I'm so sorry for the late reply! Really, gomen ne! I hope that I can still be of some help. So Sasha, she... It was stated in the LN that she 'has a mature charm and cheerful presence' with her. And she's about 20 so you can somewhat Imagine what kinda person she might be. Her aura is neutral. She's fairly cooperative, sane and friendly and can get serious and ferocious when the situation requires it. I mean she was the first Gandálfr and an elf, wasn't she? She also said that she usually gets a bit shy around strangers. But she removed her robes in front of someone. (She was wearing tights underneath, kay?) So that trait is a bit a like Rukshana, remember?
She too refers to humans as barbarians like other elves. And she was scolding Brimir lol. (He seemed a cool-headed person) And as a part of the Elven race, she demands respect. And you know right that they were lovers? Brimir and Sasha, that is? So they get along and work good as a team, though there may be some natural differences. There.
I had to read the chapter again which introduced her and Brimir to get the details. I dunno how to put a conclusion but it seemed inportant to put down each trait of her that was mentioned. So... I guess you got the clue? Sry again for the late reply. And I hope that I'm not delaying the chapter because of this. Are you going to talk about some of Halkeginia's history in the next chapter or what? And ZERO KUN! I told you it's no big deal! You can ask me anything you need to know! It's a pleasure to be helpful!

Ok then, that's all there is to it. It's always a joy to talk to you! Thanks again for the chapter! I love all the tiny bits of development that you add to their relationship during their stay in Japan. It's so heartwarming. I'm waiting for the next chapter!
Eager to see the next chapter!
Update again!
See ya~ ZERO Kun!
Louito4eva!

Sup, i been reading this particular fanfic for a while (i don't have any account then) and i am suprised that i just make a new account now just to review it.

Anyway, let's start with what i really want to say for a long time now. You say you will never drop this fanfic and i am suprised you stay true to that, i mean 76 chapters that's dedication right there, the most i seen only consist of 28 chapters.

Next, i want to say your writing and story is really great, it makes me want to know what's next, also i heard you from malaysia, well hello from your neighbor (i am from indonesia). Your english also really great and you have a wide array of vocalbulary.

Also next, i have a few suggestions. First thing i hear you'll make louise pregnant in the sequel and you want them to have 2 daughters, may i suggest that you make them twin? Alright next, in the sequel please make colbert-sensei dream come true of coming to Saito's world (maybe you can put it in the ending). Thank you for reading my suggestions.

Sincerely, Andasen

P.S I hope you are well always

Hello! I read this chapter and I am amazed. It reminds me about the many times I painted many art works as a hobby/pastime of mine. I have been self-taught in fine arts for at least ten years, where creativity and techniques come alive. Artistic creation can rise and fall, but reading your stories have provided me with an avenue of engagement, hilarity and slice-of-life vibes. Keep doing your best and looking forward to reading the next chapter (the 75th)!

Some ideas for upcoming chapters:
1. Halloween costume party (appearances of Michael Myers, Freddy Krueger and Jason Voorhees)
2. Hiking in Hokkaido (Winter is Coming) - with an open-air onsen in the dark of night
3. Pregnancy prank on family (goes wild)

Can't believe it's 4 years old. I wasn't here from the start, yet once I started reading I just couldn't stop. A lot of authors give up their story after a few months, so it's really inspiring to see a long running series. Congrats, and keep up the good work!
P.S. I look forward to that lemon;)