| Reviews for What Comes Next? |
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xianiaHarMione chapter 31 . 7/4 Im crying in this chapter... Heck... |
rachybaby chapter 43 . 7/2 Loved it! What a fab story. You almost destroyed me when Hermione had that miscarriage - it was heart wrenching. And then Andy died...you’re mean. I love all the pairings and kids. Love that you’ve made Daisy Dursley a witch and a Hufflepuff. Bet Vernon went ballistic! Tosser. Thanks you for a fab story, I adore Val and Michel, wonderful original characters. I loved the painting Michel does if Harry and Hermione. I’ve been mooching at your Pinterest as the story has gone on. Definitely gonna have a look at more of your stories. rachybaby |
Guest chapter 13 . 6/3 I don’t know why everybody’s hating this story. This is a FANFICTION. She makes her own choices. It doesn’t exactly have to line up to the books or movies. I think it’s a wonderful fanfiction. It makes my heart warm where there is no bashing from the Weasleys. I know you are not active Bex-La-Get but don’t get discourage from these reviews. This is a great fanfiction and one of my favorites. Keep up the good work and stay safe. |
FanFicfan111 chapter 12 . 4/22 Danced in the tent? Thats in the stupid movie, not from the book. This fan fiction is for Harry Potter book not movie, you are the illiterate using movie scenes cause you cant read book? Un-Favorited. In the books Hermone was too sad with Ron leaving, there was always an awkarfterd silence between Harry and Herminoe, and Harry spent his time looking at the maruder's map to see how Ginny was doing. Without Ron Harry and Hermione never got along, except for the graveyard scene. Once again go write fan fictions on movie section, illiterates like you who cant read books dont deserve to write about them. 2 hours films were too short to fill 600 page books, omitted tons of scenes, and the few things they added like a stupid dance scene after a beloved best friend just left (mostly ourt of concern for his family after he heard "the weaslys dont need losing another kid") and that when they were in the middle of war was garbage. harry was never sensitive and would never even think of that. I still read Harry/Hermione but you using a stupid movie scene ruined it all ! |
FanFicfan111 chapter 43 . 4/21 Nice! |
Boldino chapter 43 . 1/31 Thanks for this Beautiful Story. I love the little Information in the end: Daisy Dursley Huffelpuff Cheers |
WoomyWobble chapter 43 . 12/23/2019 I really loved this story. It was cute. Thanks for writing it. |
Guest chapter 41 . 10/6/2019 Yeah, she's absolutely right to not give him at a choice in something important like their child. Sincerely, Bex-La-Get, FUCK YOU. You make it seem like Harry, the father, is insignificant. Harry seems like a brow-beaten wimp while his wife dictates literally everything, like as if his feelings are not important and worthless. Reverse the genders, bitch. What if Harry said the same words that Hermione said to him? Fuck you, Bex, you cunt. |
Schmaing003 chapter 41 . 9/12/2019 I completely agree with another reviewer, Hermione's horrible unilateral choice to reject naming her baby after Harry parents was cruel and her reason stupid as hell. She has been controlling and mean multiple times and this was the top. She doesn't care for Harry's feelings at all... and how you portrayed Harry is unconscionable... he of course goes back begging forgiveness.. he has too he has had a terrible life and Hermione was his only light, she controls his ability to be happy to an unhealthy degree... this story had so many good moments but ended with a subservient and cowed Harry who reminds me more of Arthur Weasley than he does of the boy we all loved. :-( |
Guest chapter 8 . 9/9/2019 Good nice |
kimbclar chapter 43 . 9/2/2019 Fabulous story! |
takingflight48 chapter 43 . 8/8/2019 ANOTHER WITCH WITH THE DURSLEYS! What a sweet sweet story. I cried, I laughed, I raged a little, and I loved it. Congrats on graduating (haven't checked when this was written so it could have been ages ago) but good on you! I remember all of my graduations and it seems crazy how high school was already 10 years ago...crazy. ANYWAY loved it and so glad I read it! |
AvatarRobbaz chapter 43 . 7/26/2019 Excellent story! I really liked how Draco Neville and Harry became professors. Would have liked to see Harry be headmaster someday but I suppose the story would have been too long for that. Overall I generally like this little love story between them both. I personally thought that should have been the way book 7 ended. They always seemed far more compatible. Great job on it and I hope you write more soon ! |
LuSekir chapter 42 . 7/14/2019 I liked the story very much. It's a believable continuation of their life. The only thing I got confused about: how can Neville be head of Hufflepuff? I always thought you have to have been in the respective house. Thanks a lot for your brilliant imagination |
Harry Fan chapter 42 . 5/24/2019 Good story, well written. Seemed a little more Hermione based than Harry based but it was good. |