Reviews for Valkyria Gear: The Phantom Chronicles
For'Sleep chapter 3 . 10/24
Wow, this story is great. Update please ω
Guest chapter 3 . 7/13
Please continue this it really good and has so much potential
shinshuichi01 chapter 3 . 7/26/2019
If you update this story please this a great story you created
randomidiot1816 chapter 3 . 2/24/2019
*ahem*
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The Reader chapter 3 . 11/21/2018
Sigh. You're that type of author who keeps on making stories but never finishes, never sticks to one or two. You know that ain't really good if you keep on abandoning your works just like some used napkin.

Question? When will you at least learn to inform the readers that this is on hiatus, dropped, still in the works status. When will you at least know the limits of having so many stories but all incomplete.

Suggestion? Fix your problem. Update.

I was going to make a review about the writing, story, and the form but fuck that if when i learned how many stories you left around in the dust. This is not a threat nor is it a hate review. This is a just my statement and opinion of what I read and saw from you as a reader.
trexoil chapter 3 . 11/14/2018
damn this was good
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2017
So uh...

Are you gonna update this or it's discontinued?
Ronmr chapter 3 . 6/12/2017
Good story, please update it.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/23/2017
More
Guest chapter 3 . 2/7/2017
Love this story so far I hope you continue it.

I have a few question's like later on in the story will we see Sahelanthropus and Battle Gear being used in battle.

Also will Miller create a burger stand on Mother Base or Gallia? I remember he was using Code Talker to taste test his burger's for a burger joint called Miller's Maxi Buns. Also when Miller meets Alicia and taste her bread will he ask her to supply him with her bread for his burger's?
thundercharger123 chapter 3 . 1/8/2017
I'm so curious what's going to happen next damn :c anyway keep up the amazing work
Danney chapter 3 . 1/1/2017
Interesting, looking forward to reading more.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/2/2016
Well Diamond Dogs are merc's after all I would not be surprised if they did some work for the Empire for they don't take sides, unless the Empire attacked them unprovoked.
Batmd chapter 3 . 10/23/2016
Nice
Unzealots chapter 1 . 10/14/2016
Dude your first chapter made me cringe so much... You chop up so many sentence that I was reading like a robot tone voice. Also theirs other ways to express it then this. Also I notice you took scene from someone else and modify it to suit your needs. Why well I read this other guy fic named Rafchi and the Title is:Metal Gear Solid Code Zero. I'm not sure if you somehow stole it... or just modify so it looks like you made it up, or just plain coincidence that you both have the same scene but different perspective. All in all this part is very similar but different in it's own way. Also you should smooth out some of your characters interaction with each other and not chop them into small parts of action or sentence. It's just made it look bad and all.
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