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Precarious Obsessions chapter 5 . 7/2 Sakura gushing over Shisui was so cute! |
Precarious Obsessions chapter 4 . 7/2 Loved Sakura’s fight scene, Shisui’s enterance into the story, and Sasuke figuring out his teammates aren’t useless! Also I wonder what Tsunade is gonna uncover! |
Bella Scullw chapter 7 . 6/14 I found this fic by chance and I just have to say thanks! You gave me an interesting vision about Sakura, I know that she is a character with a lot of wasted potential, something that you carry here in a different way. And that little conflict that she has with Itachi killed me, I mean I had never thought that Itachi could despise her for her weakness but when I read the spoilers for the novels everything fell into place. Itachi who wanted to end wars with force would surely have despised a weak girl who distracted her beloved brother. Oh, oh, that terrible phrase he said to him about "Kunoichi's attempt" was so "auch". It hurt even me, and it was certainly a powerful and dire incentive for Sakura to finish deciding that she wanted to do something real. I like your Tsunade, it is as it was at the beginning, with that insolent, arrogant and cunning light layer that was losing little by little until there was nothing left, except for a superficial packaging of rude hardness just to justify that it was still the same but not. This dark fic with political traps, double agents and more deserves to be adored, it should exist more like this. It inspired me quite a bit so again thanks for writing it. On the other hand, since the Uchiha clan was never massacred and all that because Minato was able to remove suspicions from them, how much difference there was with that thanks to God! Although things are certainly far from peaceful due to Danzo and Orochimaru. I must also mention the thing about Kizashi and the bullying of Sakura, it is true that it once crossed my mind if Sakura's parents were so blind that they never noticed it or simply ignored it, but your explanation fits everything so perfect that for me it is is super-canon. It shows once again the atrocious side of the ninja world, because while it sounds repulsive as the officer who attacked Kizashi said, they are training assassins, it was certainly easy for them to let the weak gobble up. Wow, that whole horrible system gave me the chills, and how Sakura was practically abandoned by her father (and he is not to blame!) And that completely destroyed her, it is as if she had been told that the person she was was worthless, that her soft and calm character was a mistake, that she was a mistake. I can't imagine how it must have affected her, not only made her selfish and spoiled, but also made her maintain an insane obsession with aspiring to love and acceptance. God, everything is so cruel. I hope someday you can continue it, if not I will remember this fic with great affection, as I said it gave me another perspective on the ninja world and Sakura, and it inspired me a lot too. Kisses, beauty. PS: I hope you understand the review, I don't speak English and the google translator is not very good. |
FairyLetters chapter 7 . 1/7 My favorite story thus far. And this is eother discontinued or dropped completely. Such a waste of wonderful plot. I love the relationships between the characters– especially Sasuke, Shikamaru and Sakura. The feud between Ino and Sakura is well played. I sincerely hope you continue this someday. |
Lovely Arabella chapter 7 . 12/31/2019 I absolutely am in love with this fanfiction. I love how you’ve made it your own but still managed to keep similar elements. I enjoyed how you had Sakura change. Also I like how you portrayed the falling out between Sakura and Ino. Sakura not going with team gai and team 7 back to Suna is going to affect the story heavily which I’m looking forward to seeing. Sakura not going means that Kankuro will most likely die because nobody in the sand village was able to come up with the antidote. That probably means Chiyo will probably die when she fights sasori and Gaara will die too. All that is like a chain of events waiting to happen since there’s no medic that went with the rescue team. Also please give Sakura a better outfit than she had in shippuden it was the worst one. But please update soon. This is amazing, fantastic, wonderful. |
Mei chapter 7 . 5/4/2019 I HOPE SAKURA CAN KICK SASORI'S ASS WITHOUT CHIYO CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE, LET'S SEE HOW BADASS (AND COLD) SAKURA GOT XDD |
Mei chapter 5 . 5/4/2019 Lol yayy Sakura fighting duck ass was pretty badass lmao. And finally she'll learn super strength! |
dlwlrmay chapter 7 . 4/9/2019 please update more author-san this story is really good, despite how heartbreaking things is for Sakura ... I really wish there would be someone by her side who knows all and supports her. though Shikamaru in one of them... but for the things that look... he has temari |
dlwlrmay chapter 7 . 4/9/2019 this is really interesting... I'm rather quite intrigued by Shikamaru and Itachi stands on all of this regarding Sakura |
Kazumi Tachikawa chapter 7 . 7/21/2018 Damn this is good. I keep imagining how sasuke sakura and naruto will reunite. |
Broken Reveries chapter 7 . 6/6/2018 I really love this story! Can’t wait to read more! Keep up the good work |
v.yeesha chapter 1 . 3/17/2018 Please update T.T |
WhatUsernameShouldIUseNow chapter 7 . 3/14/2018 ASDFGJKSLJDKAKXJAKZKSJABAJXK~NCNWKXKDKSKGKECKDKMCK2KXKFKKCJWJZIdOW AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! FUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCC I'M SO FREAKIN MAD. IT'S TOO GOOD. Please update soon i'm begging on my knees. This story absolutely phenomenal. It wouldn't even be an exageration to say that this is now within the top 3 of my favorite sakura-centric fanfics. Not that it has any weight whatsoever, but it's been a while since i've read a good and quite lengthy fanfiction that makes me want to stop reading halfway, all because I know that I would have to wait agonizingly for an update. I despair over the fact that this only has 7 chapters, lengthy, but not quite enough to satiate my intense longing for more content. I read the last chapter especially slowly knowing I only had a few more thousand words to relish before I needed to wait for an unknown amount of time to get another few thousand words of amazing plot. Thank you so much for giving us this stunning piece of fanfiction. |
Guest chapter 7 . 2/28/2018 Really love this story, please update soon! |
Outau chapter 7 . 1/2/2018 update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon update soon |