love it

This is sooo good! Can’t wait to read the rest of it! But Leah... oh god, Leah. I want to beat her ass... I hope you do it for me! Crossing my fingers!

Okay... if I read that right... Lauren purposely almost got Bella RAPED because SHE DATED A GUY SHE LIKED?! How could ANYONE be that catty or cruel? That would’ve scarred her for life and given her so many mental and emotional problems... jeez louise. I feel like making it all Lauren’s fault was a little too much, but, overall the whole party scene did fulfill the sense of foreboding you had been giving the party ever since it was first mentioned.
I just hope Bella will be alright after this. AND on top of that, she was just ready to go all the way with Paul! I wonder if that’s going to change... obviously, even though the worst did not occur, the whole experience seems like it would still be extremely traumatizing.
And don’t even get me started about FRICKIN ANGELA! Her friend was almost raped and she says, “don’t call the cops because Jessica could get grounded”. WTF!? That guy has most likely done this before and probably will try and do it again to some poor girl who doesn’t have a hunky, super-protective, super-strong, imprinted werewolf and his pack mates to protect her.
I realize this is just a FanFic, but, HONESTLY! Who thinks, “my friend might get grounded for throwing a party so don’t call the cops” after her friend got roofied and almost raped? And Angela doesn’t know about the wolves so she couldn’t have been saying that to protect them.
On one last note, “cinnamon” no longer looks like a word.

Loving ur story so much, keep up the great work!...;*

Doesn't that suck Lahote lol

Way to go Charlie!

F*ck Alice...

Typical Quil lol

Whyyyyy?

Sam's kind of douche...it's difficult to feel pity for him.

Good ole Charlie reaction lol

Sam's a POS in my opinion. Poor Emily stuck in the middle...

It was difficult to read with a straight face lol

Quil... you're dead lol

Sensitive Paul is just perfect