Oh so Ruka and Rima hmm interesting.

Awesome zero is making friends.

Gotta love Kaien cross.

Seriously kaname what's wrong with you for speaking to zero like that.

Thank you for making this a Vampire Knight Story with naughty perv kaname and zero. I wonder if zero and Senri become friends?.

Please update if possible

WAIT WAIT, Machigai Machi(gai) GAYYYY anyways great story! uwu

Your rewritten version is an improvement.
Not to say that the original is bad, the new version is just better.

Good luck rewriting!~ (You do know you can replace chapters right?)

I hope that Zero stays the same and that he stays in day class, because when he changes houses his personality changes and I don't like that. Make Kaname work to get Zero, so keeping them separate would be a good thing.

I also don't like Zero being in a place where he's not liked, with vampires that might want to harm him even if their told not to.

All in all good start to your rewrite

So is this still a story where Zero will be a Carrier Vampire? or is it taking a different path?

do you still plan on doing the sequel after you finish this story? I can't wait to find out what happens!

One word to describe the story:
Boring.
Before you get mad or infuriated or whatever, let me tell you that the story comes out as something without a solid story line because everything's rushed. The characters doesn't get developed in the plot, hence, it's a mess. I get OOCness but the end result was just incomprehensible. Your idea for the story was great. It just didn't came out right, I suppose.

oh shit, Kaname will be very furious o.o next plisss this fict is lifeuuu XD

Wow i am so surprise that zero run away right that I still like dictator kaname but he must bring Romantic side of him on the table and apologize in the right way because zero will beyond pissed when kaname seen him next time