| Reviews for The Betrayal of Flames |
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Guest chapter 13 . 7/7 HELL YEAH SHE'S FUCKING DEAD IM SO PROUD IM GONNA CRY GO NATSU FUCK THEM ALL |
Guest chapter 16 . 5/25 Please update! I LOVE this story! |
WanderingMercAsashi chapter 1 . 9/9/2019 Another idiot that can't type for s**t. |
Etherious.Nat5u.Dragneel chapter 2 . 5/2/2018 good 2 meet another young fan ficer i'm 15 ill post my story in a year or two (i hate it when people do hiatuses so i'm just gonna post it all at once |
E.N.D chapter 10 . 11/1/2017 I don't care about Lucy but I do care about Erza. Get some sleep sick human. |
E.N.D chapter 7 . 11/1/2017 Thanks. No prob. |
E.N.D chapter 5 . 11/1/2017 Gruvia, GaLe, Laxus and Mira, Jerza, no Romeo and Wendy! Absolutely not! |
E.N.D chapter 3 . 11/1/2017 Thanks. You too. |
E.N.D chapter 2 . 11/1/2017 Melissa, Melinda, Molly, Meldy, something. |
E.N.D chapter 1 . 11/1/2017 It was there fault. They pushed too many of my buttons. |
Tiki chapter 2 . 9/17/2017 For dragonslayer M maybe Merida? Or Menemth? I dunno, just a few ideas |
Snazzy chapter 2 . 6/4/2017 You need to work on your writing skills, this could have actually been a good story if you make a few small pharagraphs instead of one massive one. This usually makes the reader put down the story. This is the same with me, I will not be continuing to read on. I wish you better luck in the future:) |
RockyVsCreed chapter 16 . 2/25/2017 Sure.. I will wait this summer! |
Malifacter0605-XxKINDSOULSxX chapter 11 . 2/10/2017 Just a tip from one fanfic lover to another. While it is a good thing to get some of the sells correct with the offical ones it can always be fun to make up your own and suprise the audience |
Guest chapter 16 . 11/8/2016 Yea! I waited!~ |