i sort of agree with bones about being mad about what spock
did to jim. i almost want jim to be with someone else, someone grand,
someone powerful, someone awesome, someone who is crazy about jim...
just to show spock what it feels like to see your soulmate with someone
else. just to see how jim felt when he was with the other girl...

this is the very first star-trek fanfic i am reading. i have a collection of star trek books but
never ventured to read any fanfics and i must say, you have impressed me thus far. i am enjoying it immensely though of course, there are some disappointments in the characters themselves which in no way has any bearing on your awesome writing of this story. i realize spock is this no feeling logical thinker but his actions have been quite illogical imho. also, i wish jim didn't have to do so much chasing...wish spock did some of that and shows it blatantly though i know i know, he is a vulcan and must not be emotional, blah blah... anyways, going to the next chapter...can't wait to continue...

While I love sex as much as the next guy, and I can't believe I am saying this, enough already. I was hoping for some actual adventure. While you touch on it, it doesn't seem to be your focus. While your characters are lovely, sadly your story at this time is... not! I will read a couple more chapters but seriously if this is to remain your focus, I will pass. I mean I think we get it you wanted a warmer Spock. My thought becomes, so what.

That book was an excellent read, back in those days I read them all. One book published a month. I have seen the influence those books have on your writing style. You are very good. I can see the characters act out your words as I read. That is the highest compliment I can pay you. Brilliant creative story. Thank you for that. The ever critical fun loving...Ghost!

Love it. Brought tears to my eyes. Fantastic, brilliantly done!

Thanks for another great chapter. You truly know how to capture these characters, their motivations and their relationships. Thanks for writing and sharing your stories which all deserve hundreds of reviews. I can't wait to read more.

Lov.

Loved the chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing your stories which all deserve hundreds of reviews. I can't wait to read more.

Are you going with the theory that The Albino is Voq?

Thanks for another awesome chapter. It seems that they're destined to save the galaxy no matter the crisis or the bad guys. I'm glad that they all have each other, because only a tight knit and strong family could do what they do and survive the mental and physical strain. Thanks for writing and sharing your amazing stories which all deserve hundreds of reviews. The chapter rocked, and I can't wait to read more.

Nice

Excellent! I loved reading your star trek fanfiction! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Thanks for another great chapter. What I love about your stories is the family and the friendship shared by Jim and the crew. They love and respect each other, and they really are the good guys. Thanks for writing and sharing your awesome stories which deserve hundreds of reviews. I love your writing, and I can't wait to read more.

Looking forward to the next chapter

Thanks for another great chapter. I absolutely love how Jim finds solutions to problems that no one else would come up with. Actually, many of my young students might come up with the same solutions, because they're logical and can see the small and big pictures. I love how the crew support her, and I agree that her solution was the best. I'm interested in seeing how this war plays out. Thanks for writing and sharing some of the best stories in any fandom with us readers. All of your stories deserve hundreds of reviews. I thoroughly enjoyed the chapter, and I can't wait to see what will happen next.