| Reviews for The Sum OF Sin |
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I'm Dying in America chapter 4 . 2/21/2005 This is an excellent fic. You did a really good job portraying "Kenshin's" insanity. You should update this. |
xZig-zagx chapter 4 . 10/23/2004 This was a very good story I wish you would finish it. |
PsychoSushi chapter 4 . 5/14/2004 Hail Chandra, Queen of Angst! |
Jiya Minamoto chapter 2 . 8/23/2003 more! (And whos Tomoe? ) |
Berserker lazy today chapter 4 . 4/23/2003 Hurray! It's that feeling that the entire world is against you. I reckon that this one won't last very much longer, but I've had fun reading it! |
omochi chapter 4 . 4/23/2003 wow, freaky, hey, wouldn't kenshin be considered insane? or something? cause he kinda is. he did not know whathe was doing. He was "not in his right mind and should not be held responsible for his actions" uh... yeah, anyway, keep it up! update soon! |
Gypsy-chan chapter 4 . 4/22/2003 Just read your ficcie and wow! It's definitely going to be a challenge. As you said MPD is a tough thing to prove and is what some criminals rely on to get off. I feel sorry for both Kenshin and Kaoru. I think you portrayed Kaoru's response with his evaluation and in the courtroom correctly. She was only given a week to evaluate him and within that short timeframe, he attacked her. Also, I think Kaoru feels bad for having her testimony used against him. I sorry for her. Now, I love your choice of judges. Saitou makes the perfect judge. Nothing like receiving Saitou's brand of justice. Keep up the great work._ |
Kitsanken chapter 4 . 4/21/2003 You can't leave it at that! What happened to Kenshin. . .er. . .Battousai? **shrugs** What happened to him? Poor Kenshin. . .so messed up. . .and no one willing to help. Very sad. More please? I am SO looking forward to the next chappie. Keep up the great work. _~ Chiruken |
Jason M. Lee chapter 4 . 4/21/2003 that... bites. in a sad way, it makes sense but it still sucks for Kenshin. not surprised Saitou's the judge. |
Jiya Minamoto chapter 1 . 4/19/2003 I likes |
Ai chapter 3 . 3/28/2003 O.O this fic is incredible so far! your descriptions are simply amazing...beautiful beautiful beautiful details please update soon? please? more? i don't have any cookies to offer right now, but might i interest you with some pudding? not just ANY pudding, fruit flavored pudding (trust me it's GOOD)? weirdness aside though, i can't wait for your next update! keep up the GREAT work! |
Luli451 chapter 3 . 3/14/2003 I do think that your story is interesting..! Loved it so far! So keep going. ... Try to make longer chaps..? Please? Chuicks & encouraging hugs! |
Berserker-M chapter 3 . 3/13/2003 ah yes... he's back to normal at this moment... I like him better scary. That's just the type of person I am though... please don't quit this one! It makes me so happy to see updates... |
omochi chapter 3 . 3/13/2003 man, kenshin is kinda freaky. augh, anyway, keep it up! update soon! |
Kitsanken chapter 3 . 3/12/2003 How did I miss the extra added stuff at the end of the last chappie? I hadn't realized that Kaoru had been attacked when I started reading this chapter and had to go back to reread the previous one. Scary stuff! S/K/B all locked in one body. Kaoru was a bit harsh in this chappie (IMHO) but I suppose she can't afford to be soft towards her patients/clients. (Not sure what Kenshin would be classified as in this insatance.) Keep up the great work! I'm looking forward to more. . . I'm definitely caught and intrigued by this ficcie of yours. _~ Chiruken |