Love it

Great story ..a little twist here and there ..great use of characters thanks for sharing have fun

Sorry, but I'm out. I won't be able to like this Edward, like ever. And even I can detect grammar mistakes (my English is awful. I'm not a native speaker nor formally educated in the language).
I think that the story has potential, but only if you paint this guy in a more likable way. I can't relate to Bella falling in love with this monster.
Anyway, thank you for putting yourself out and for sharing. If you wanted to taste the waters with this plot, you have my feedback at least. I'm going to check if you have any other stories to read. Bye!

I'm sorry, but that Stockholm situations is too fuck upno more of this fic for me

I will never inderstand how we always said aww he changed.. but if is other than Edward we hate the character

Awwww took a lot to get there but they finally made it.

Different take on a mob story. Thank you for sharing

This was fucked up but it was a great ride.
I still don't understand why did she "thought" about Jacob the way she did if she was from volturi...I mean she looked so nervous in the first chapter, and later on in her own POV, you said that she hated feeling so helpless.

Talk about a trigger, why isn’t there a warning?

You definitely are rushing the ending... Moving waaay to fast... Need I remind you she JUST betrayed them... and he was just saying how he couldn't forgive her or completely trust yet he is putting a ring on it?

What? Ever since that plot twist, the writing inconsistencies went minor to major.

Not to mention, the giant plot hole of... if she is some secret bad ass assain... how come she allowed herself to be nearly killed and abused by Edward in the beginning... Remember the breaking of the fingers part? The choking? You tell me she fell in love with him during that?

This Bella character is a whole other character... Since when has fucking has to do with being an assassin? Ain't that what Bella is/was?

I feel you just throwing lines in for dramatic effect but they make no sense... Edward first and foremost shouldn't trust her as far as he can throw her... but he is... Actions speak louder then words. She betrayed them and Edward is giving her a pass.

I think you are going to deep into this twist of yours... Why was she with Jacob... was se ever really with Jacob? What about all that other drama... Was all that just a act?

So in the beginning, she let herself be overpowered and drugged?

Twists are good and you had a pretty good one... But making her an assassin instead of someone who details the inner workings of his crime family kinda makes the whole story irrelevant now doesn't it?

I guess it makes sense why Bella all of a sudden got 'harden' in moments of the story to then go right back to being submissive...

So last chapter makes Edward a rapist. I'm pretty sure your readers weren't expecting that, no matter the 'dark' warning.

Love it.