Love it!

Ah man this fic mmm a breath of fresh air and soothed my craving for mythical creatures. (I say soothed but now I want even more stuff and I already know i'm probably going to have to write it.) I feel like after this fic nothing can get better then this this is the peak nothing can beat this.

This was so cool! I love stories like these! Thank you for writing!
Is this really the end? ;(

hello im a new member in fan fiction and i just read this chapter(part2 of mythicals) and I found some misspelling in the Greek language ... you see Greek is my native language anw il just point out the misspelling even if its too late ;p also i dont mean to be rude :)

saving you dumbass σε σώζουμε dumbass
meet you back at your place θα σε συναντίσουμε πίσω στην (τοποθεσία)place
you are trying to kill me προσπαθείτε να με σκοτώσετε or προσπαθεί να με σκοτώσει choose wichever there both correct :)
let me out of here βγάλτε με απο εδώ
Sabo is not weird O Sabo δεν ειναι παραξενος
freedom stealer κλέπτης ελευθερειας just swap the words :)
you earth eater καταστρωφεας γης

Oh myyyyy goooooodddddd!
Please, please, Pleaseeeeeeee I beg you for another chpt!
Just one nothing else!
Oh, and I loved it!
is sexy as hell!
~Read~you~soon~

AHHHHHHHHHHH! I really hate you right now. THAT (or is it...) NEXT TO THE END IS KILLING ME! I NEEEDDD MOARRRRRRRRRR (btw I'm saying I like the story a lot and want more :P)

FAN!~

Hello :) I'm just wondering if this story is already finished or you'll continue? I hope you'll continue I love your story so... Much please update soon.
This story is fantastic I never read something like this its so unique and very original please continue.
I'm looking forward to your updates in the future :)

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This was beautiful! Love it! I like that they needed Ace all along to find the fountain! If you continue then I will look forward to it, but if not, this ended so well! I loved! Thanks for sharing!

GODDAMN YOU SHOULDNT HAVE ENDED LIKE THAT! I love this series and really hope you update soon! Plz!

This story was the one that I have more questions over, don't get me wrong I still liked it but some part of it had me tilting my head in very much the same was as Ace.

I love plot, it's unique and entirely amazing, but it had a few holes that I was left poking at. The main three were Ace's particular race, is it something in real mythology? whenever I searched up Gorgona's all i got were medusa and company because you know, Gorgons and what not but you explained that the Boa sisters were the gorgons and well I was left stumped after a couple of searched and a few explored searches. If the race is entirely of your making that is great, very cleaver and I applaud you for the creativity, fire mermaids sound like really breathtaking creatures that I would not mind seeing more of. So not really a plot hole but more like I need more information on them because I love anything mythological, and references

And then there's Ace's captivity, yes I understand that Ace was a literal fire hazard and the key to getting Luffy back in a way, and therefore necessary to get Oyaji back to health, but was he locked up too long? The way Sabo loves and cares for him would have prevented him from stalking the ship for more than a day or two. For someone as overprotective as Sabo to wait as long as four weeks, well I'm sorry to say that I can't see it happening. I mean it gave Ace a huge window to get to bond with Marco, but Sabo's actions there are questionable.

And then theres the whole Teach incident, it was kind of forgotten? as the story went on, yes WB's crew is mainly focused on the task of getting Oyaji back on his feet, but wouldn't that be even more reason for Teach to advance and attack now before Oyahi is restored in health? I'm glad he didn't come and wreck havoc lol but his traitor move was made to seem so significant for it to just be blown off, but then again it could be part of your plans for a possible sequel?

I hope i don't come off as rude or anything negative, I really did enjoy the story and the events, if there ever is a sequel I do hope to read it someday.

Thank you for the wonderful story, have a great day!~

This was amazing! I love when writers make their own kind of story out of one piece. I mean I get tired on OCs just joining whiteboards crew or straw hats it is repetitive.
This was definitely a very interesting at short story, and I hope there is a sequel possibly?

You know you could very well combine this with a bit of the pirate of the caribbean. Good story by the way.

haha I'm really enjoying this story(: it's very creative. I'm kinda surprised that Marco isn't a phoenix though haha. I feel like it'd be very fitting. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter, if this isn't the end(: