Cant wait for this to come back.

i love the story.

only weirdness is... I used to give daily full body massages
to my girlfriend for like 5 years. I never once had issues with my hands so the pain concept really doesn't make sense. Coupled with the fact that I also played guitar for hours daily and if not that web dev coding and video games... well hand pain just doesn't make sense

regardless loving what I'm readin

I don't know if you still frequent the site, but I do want to say you did a very good job with this one, it has a good feel to it and is heartwarmingly and heart string tuggingly amazing.

Nice story btw keep it up :)

I'll be honest here. Some of his actions seem reminiscent of someone expected to perform a task, or suffer some form of abuse. Then not aptly appreciated for his efforts and experiencing abuse to enforce a certain behavior in him. This is what m
I'm seeing.

Please get glynda, coco and velvet into the massages maybe even professor peach of she ever shows herself

Being inside your interpretation of Jaune's head is uncomfortable, because the contents are incredibly familiar.

I hope that of you continue the story he can fond his way ouf of that lonely, isolated state of mind.

I sure love reading a story about massages only to get a quarter of it while the rest is just talking.

...Was that an Unlimited Blade Works reference at the end?

This is painful to read. I get that people don't like Jaune. I get that shippers hate any guy getting in the way of their...daydreams. But holy shit dude(?). Jaune in this fic makes the Buzzfeed Try Guys look downright masculine in comparison.

god damnit

Boring, over-dramatized trash full of toxic piece of shit characters that are somehow supposed to fall in love. I came here to read a romance not an idiots impression of poor mental health.

Why did you make a cuck jaune? Not joking, i know real cucks in real life who act just like this. Was this on purpose or an accident?

yeah no idea how romance would bloom here, this whole fic the girls have pretty much been low-key insulting jaune in their heads. Seems like the start of a toxic relationship.

I must admit the extremely slow pace of the story is engaging, even if the pace of *updates*...

*Ahem*

Really loving how introspective and detailed the character interactions are. Nothing feels out of place, and the central mystery of what's eating Jaune Arc is a really compelling premise. Really looking forward to more of this.