That was AMAZING

Just so it is known- I do NOT read fanfiction, but upon seeking references of Dishonored fanfictions I stumbled across this one. I am glad I did. More so- I am glad it is completed. That I found it when I did. I am eager to have a long story ahead.

Really cool story, it felt right and the story telling is fantastic. I like how you play with us til the end about the identity of the "mortal", I like the parts when he's teaching them. What I like also is the way the mortal answers when they do, it's so neutral and it gives so little information about them it's maddening. And I loved to see the Outsider's mind, and it's funny how he feels like he needs a confident! The story about him is also fascinating, I loved how you dealt with it. I was a bit wary of your story at first but I'm glad I took the time to read it. It was an amazing ride!

*grins widely* I KNEW it!

I meant to put this on the other review but I forgot. Do you work for arkane? All of this seems like foreshadowing and kinda canon

I figured out it was Emily right at the start. Glad to see I was right.

that was a perfectly executed reveal

The mortals Emily. Solely based on the pure disgust at knowing where and when her parents had sex

Interesting. Ignotis(Latin for Unknown(Unknown Named Mortal is now named in my eyes)) Has the Outsiders Mark. I wonder what his Abilities/Powers will be. Also, great work on this chapter

Just so you know, this story is heavily underated. Your take on the outsider is magnificent, I'll be waiting for the next chapter with much intrigue.

Still like the way you capture the outsider in your writing, bit the best parts of your story were always the interactions between him and the mortal. You capture the spirit of the original quite well in those.

This is an amazingly good story. Please write more. Im gonna go check out your other stuff.

If the Mortal were to get the Outsider's Mark(It Seems like he Will, sort of?), Then here are some Ideas for Power's:

Greed: have any person you wish fight over Possesion of Coin. Upgrade: The Peaple will Fight For your Security, istead of Coin.

Desire: Have any chosen peraon fight for you for a limited time. Upgreade: increases Duration

Outsiders Gaze: Allows you to find any Rune's or Bone charms in the Vacinity. Upgrade: Increases Bone Charm Strength

Guilt: The chosen person will stop in their footsteps and cower at a memory of something that they are guilty of. Upgrade: You can go into their memory abd kill them.

Outsiders Footsteps: Allows you to walk partially in the void, making you Virtually invisable to everyone. Upgrade: Any person that See's you is eaten by the void.

I throughly enjoyed reading this story, I love the concept and I can see no faults with it, except for the fact that it is too good to be so short. Keep up the good work.

This is a good story. You should continue with this.