Reviews for Thwarted
mg0651957 chapter 26 . 6/10
Hi! I just wanted to commend you on this wonderful work. I didn’t know I could feel so many emotions. I feel so conflicted. On one hand I know that Ben is trying so hard and he loves her as best he can, but in the other he is going the wrong way about it. I appreciate the fact that you call Kylo’s creepy behavior out as opposed to just romanticizing it which is way more common than it should be. Also this chapter in particular just made me feel dread. I was so hopeful that he would finally begin to improve. Then he ruined it I just feel dread because this is not going to end well for him and I’m just sad in advance. Thank you for sharing this!
Guest chapter 75 . 5/24
Loved this fic, the way you wrote it made it all so believable and the feelings i had while reading were intoxicating
HellCutePanda chapter 75 . 4/11
That was a wonderful story! Great flow and perfect pace in terms of how their feelings slowly changed. The happy ending had me grinning.
Kichi chapter 75 . 2/25
That was absolutely amazing! I loved every chapter! I should have reviewed each one but I couldn't stop reading. I loved you Kylo, needy jealous thing that he was, I sadly have a few things in common with how he dealt with his issues, or I did. No murder though, lol
Anyway, fantastic job! I love this story!
boomletstudios chapter 75 . 2/6
omg, welp I read this straight through, my gosh this was such an emotional roller coaster. I really loved it, Good work!
LimitedEternity chapter 4 . 1/27
I really love the stories with an obsessive Kylo pursuing Rey for some reason... And you're doing an excellent job portraying what's going on in his head. Great job!
Rowan chapter 75 . 1/26
This is defiantly one of the best fan fictions I have ever read! I was gripped from the first page and have loved every single part of it. Thank you so much for taking the time to write it! :))
LimitedEternity chapter 1 . 1/27
Dark, pushy, obsessed... We're off to a very strong start.
whitemoon919 chapter 75 . 1/19
This story is amazing! I have enjoyed it too much. All those moments of love and regret were the ones that touched my soul the most. I cried like a child when Kylo finally redeems himself, it's such a strong range of feelings. The fic is wonderful and gorgeous, I loved it from beginning to end!
107derwent chapter 75 . 1/13
What an amazing journey it has been! Thank you so much for sharing such an incredible story! I loved every piece of it, and couldn’t stop reading it from the very first day! I wish this was the original story of the movies because it’s perfect! Thank you thabk you thank you sooooo much for it! Hope to read more from you!
Kagami420 chapter 75 . 1/11
Great story really cute
107derwent chapter 59 . 1/10
Yes yes yes! Leia is alive! I do hope she is, and not some Force trick. Haha
107derwent chapter 58 . 1/9
YES! That’s the moment i was waiting for since the very beginning. Wow! What a painful but beautiful chapter to read. I felt every piece of my soul break with Kylo as he reasoned everything he’d done in his life. Damn, that was intense and so well-written! And i can’t deny i waited for the moment when he would set Rey free. From the beginning their love story ressembled a lot to the Beauty and the Beast, and this is the moment when he would be finally redeemed. I’m glad you thought that too, because their relationship was indeed abusive and creepy (although we were loving it at the same time lol).
Nice job as always! You’re an amazing writer!
107derwent chapter 55 . 1/7
Nooooooo! I hope that’s not true, and if it is, i hope Rey can save her and bring her back! Oh my heart... this story is amaaaaazing!
autumnjade671 chapter 55 . 1/3
huh...I read a lot of fanfiction with Hux HATING Kylo and vice versa. This is a nice change to see that he and Hux are almost friendly.
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