Reviews for The Dark Dragen Challenge Fic: Immoral Harry
MavtheMustang chapter 1 . 5/7
This is exactly why cunts like you should never be allowed to write. Typical feminist trying to make herself empowered by putting down the male species in any way they can possibly think of.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/7
What the fuck I am reading?

..Why can't I stop reading?

Why is this so funny and why is it making me horny?

Why does it feel like political message and nonsensical at the same time?

10/10
Guest chapter 11 . 2/2
yeah your story makes no sense no matter how you try to justify it.
nell chapter 6 . 1/23
no sé que perturba más, la historia o los comentarios
hpfan111 chapter 11 . 9/4/2019
Spare us the sanctimonious act and talk to some true followers of Christ and Mohammed (yes they do exist) before you preach such hateful piece of shit
jlnorris75 chapter 11 . 7/22/2019
Fuck up at the end
Solution chapter 11 . 1/11/2019
So in the end women triumph over the evil man by enslaving another man (Neville) to their will and used him to fight in their place ?
You are right, your story is a good representation of what feminism really is and how they really think.
UEURJRUFJFFK087 chapter 9 . 11/22/2018
You mean the Path of Conquest? I read it and my body shivered, imagining it in my mind
UEURJRUFJFFK087 chapter 9 . 11/22/2018
Oh my... So messed up...*eyes open wide*
Guest chapter 10 . 7/5/2018
This story was crazy intense though the end took a kinda weird unexpected turn
Guest chapter 10 . 5/18/2018
My only thought on your answer to hating Feminazis, we call Feminazis those extreme types who wish for a matriarchy. Those types who blemish 'feminism' and make it hated with their views of world dominance. If you condone them, you're no better than them.
Maitre Inquisiteur chapter 11 . 4/16/2018
I don't know what's you're probleme with Abrahamic religions but you should discuss with some real christians, muslims and jews. You would discover that your fantasized views on them are false. I hope you will evolve from your hateful state. Peace.
Maitre Inquisiteur chapter 10 . 4/16/2018
You have creepy disturbed thoughts ... I like you ; )
Scott the Wanderer chapter 11 . 1/2/2018
You know, I always have wondered what someone would write when they hadn't the reading comprehension of a blind rabid squirrel and a mindset that disallows them to understand anything more complicated than filling a diaper. Thank you showing me.

Don't get me wrong, your grammar is decent, but your dialogue is stilted, your characterization is way off, your descriptions are lacking, your understanding of theology is flawed at best and you failed to actually honor the challenge correctly. This is one of those monumental trainwrecks that is up there with 'My Immortal'
FillyDashie chapter 2 . 11/10/2017
sorry i tried. i usually find stories of a darker harry to be pretty fun to read but i cant continue reading this one. harry's personality in this is way to vile for me. i can't read when a character i like rapes someone like this.
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