screaming i love this story so much it's my favourite avengers story i just absolutely love the relationships between each of the characters and your writing is just top tier hhhh it's been so long so i can't hope for a comeback but i just got to tell you this story is amazing please and thank you

Thanks for the treat!
My penchant for spiteful comments has me wanting Tam to be on tv and say something that shines some disinfecting sunlight on the hypocrisy, and cuts to the bone in that serious placid voice of hers that amplifies guilt just by being so utterly free of reproach like: we were guilty until proven innocent, Bucky was to be handed over to someone who wouldn't have given him a trial, I thought minors were given the right to an attorney, I have yet to kill. Tam could nail any interviewer to the wall with statements like that and small details about what she has survived like "my father told me his boss wanted to meet me, and when to goons with guns tell a 13 year old to strip and get under the water, you do so". Anything to hammer home the points that she is a minor, has never breached any moral boundries, and that she has been wronged, not just by Hydra. Imagine, in such a conversation how flat an attempt at a joking "no good deed goes unpunished" would just leave it wide open for a "I thought the electric battons and shock collar were a bit much" and maybe "though recent insight into your judicial process has me wondering if bleeding in defense of you country counts as a good deed".
The blatant discomfort at not being able to say that she is wrong would do much to shame a party line or two into changing.
Just the absolute verbal carnage could do a lot of good for public opinion on both mutants and the accords, if only by chumming the waters in a different direction.
May the muses favor you,
- Kip
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Eh. Would be nice if Tamika would stand up to Steve a bit more. "We'll talk about it. No we won't. Us talking about it implies your opinion is valued, that you are somehow involved in the decision. You're not."
It feels to me like they stand up saying "We won't fight for you . . . please?"
But maybe that's just me.
Nice story so far, though Tam's 100% constant emotional instability starts to get a bit trying to read. Not that it isn't justified.

This story is so good! I can't wait to see where you take this. I especially loved that bit at the end with her family!

Your writing style is very engrossing. Good job with the OC too. Steve is made fun of for his aversion to swear words so I doubt he'd casually drop the F-bomb like that.

I love this for the way you made me FEEL the characters. I also hate you just a tiny bit for making me cry this hard.
I mean that in the absulote best way possible and would like to clarify that I do not literally hate you.

This is such an amazing story! For 'drabbles' these are really quite deep and meaningful chapters. I saw this story recommended in another fanfic and I immediately searched it up and I am so glad that I did! They were absolutely right to be complimentary about your work. I love that you've written a character who is different from the stock standard, I love everything about her and her interactions with the rest of the team, they're deep and very nicely reactionary. It's good to see someone reacting realistically to betrayal, and falling back onto the past in response. Anyway, yeah, this is lovely and I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it.

AGHHHHHH IVE READ THIS BEFORE AND CRIED AND NOW IM READING THIS AGAIN AND CRYING AGAINDNDKFNNF

Vision is too pure for this world, too pure! also shit Civil war is as painful as ever. *goes off to sob a bit*

Isn't there a full on story with her? I read it before but now I can't find it. Can you tell me were to look or the title? Thanks.

How dare you rip my heart out and stomp on it like this I love it but hate it hurts me right in the feels

You know, I kinda feel bad for saying this, but I don't really like Tamika all that much. I mean, she's a well-written, interesting character and all, but something about her just doesn't click with me. Not really sure what it is though.

Plus, I dislike Wanda, and I find it annoying how Tamika fails to find a single problem with her role in the Ultron debacle the same way everybody else does.

This is pretty interesting! I'm enjoying it. Although you made a mistake with the location. The scene with claw was in Johannesburg, not Wakanda.

really hope you'll continue this

I SAID IT BEFORE AND IM SAYING IT AGAIN, I LOVE! THIS! KID! SAM IS RIGHT TO LIKE HER TOO AND IM SO GLAD SHE HAS MORE BUDDIES LOOKING OUT FOR HER, SHE DESERVES THE WORLD!