I really appreciate this story, it seems more realistic and you flesh out the characters well through the first pov and viewpoint of the Laine. Thank you for trying again!

was that,,, a hadeston reference? damned if i do, damned if i dont? ohhh
also, love this.

This was interesting
Would love to see ya continue
Love how realistic your SI is
She's weak but trying to improve
And as with every other strawhat
She has lots of potential
And i think observation haki was a good thing for her
After her knowledge runs out she can still use it to get some real time info
Her thoughts about flying slashes makes sense
Eager to read more

Shit

Damn! How did I not find this fic before, this is good shit! Laine is so realistic I love it (and her snarky remarks!). She knows she’s not strong so she’s trying to improve herself in ways that she can. Idk why but in my head she seems like the one that everyone will forget that she’s older than them and will baby her until the time comes and she unleashes a dragon or sth HAHAHAH but gosh her fruit has so much potential I can see her asking for training from the crew to better understand what they do or their movements and all that that would make for better animations, and inking things into her body as a sort of familiar? Or how about if she’s bleeding during a fight and using her blood as a sort of ink ! I can’t wait for her to explore the boundaries of her power and get even cooler than she is now! Thanks for the read, you’re an amazing author and I can’t wait for the next update!

I need more of this...

Yeah, please update. Can't wait to see how Laine's past would be revealed. Anyway, did she come to this world with her own body, or just her soul be reborned in another? And how did she find and eat the sketch sketch fruit? I'm so eager to read morekisses to you*

update please!

Although I looked at the updated date, once I finished reading the chapters available, I can honestly say that I hope to read more soon. Can't give any suggestions or anything, sad to say.

Great chapter, can't wait for more.

This is good! :3 I hope you don't lose your motivation for this!

I like the story so far, it's really interesting! I like Laine a lot, and btw, did u know laine means 'wave' in finnish? It's a nice choice for a name ;D

I'm bad at words so :)))))))))))))))))))))))

Epic Chapter!
Hope Laine tells them about Haki and trains herself on her own haki.

id say laine needs to put name in her place... but honestly, you don't just stop a terror of greed like that. Finally a girl who isn't unnaturally obsessed with clothes and downgrading any man she comes across and nami's going to corrupt her... sniff, why!?