You were the first gwtw fanfic author I have ever read! I hope you are well during this pandemic, and return someday

Really hope you add an epilogue:
What happened next? Where they happy? Did she get her son?

Some spacing and page breaks would help, it runs to close together. You have to read twice to work pour what dream and what’s real.

Excellent story!

As i read your author's note I'm reminded of your profile note that you have a WIP you are working on. I hope you will share that with us soon.
As for this story, I very much liked the ending. Truthfully, I was entertained by the entire story especially since both Butler children are alive and well, and Scarlett and Rhett seem happy together. Thanks for sharing such a lively story with us.

This chapter was promising as Scarlett struggles with what she wants from Rhett. After the uncertainty of the last few chapters, this was one of my favorite parts of this story.

I can't imagine how much nerve it took for Rhett to admit to Scarlett that he would miss their Tara sleeping arrangements and yet again, there is a missed opportunity for them to come to an understanding. I do believe that Rhett is disappointed by Bonnie's desire to sleep in the nursery especially when he's received no invitation from Scarlett. I'm loving this story and am thoroughly unhappy that it is almost over. I would love for it to continue.

The return to Atlanta should be very interesting. Rhett should be worried. He has done nothing to reassure Scarlett or let her know how he feels about her and the children. I also wish he could focus on Wade and Ella a bit more.

Bonnie will be VERY unhappy with this new development. I can't wait to see how she will react to a baby sister. Love the baby's name and I agree that Scarlett would choose such a regal name. Lovely chapter.

What I love most about this story are the scenes of day to day family life. I love watching Rhett parent Bonnie and the cute exchanges with Scarlett as they enter their own period of detente.

Baby steps. Everything with these two must occur slowly. I can completely concur with Scarlett's anger and cautiousness. Rhett needs to try much harder to make things better with Scarlett. You write Rhett so well. I love reading completed stories!

If their best moments and conversations all occur in the middle of the night than keep these two in that bed! Lovely chapter with the promise of more honest interactions to come.

Another missed opportunity. Interesting that Rhett realizes he is using Belle much like Scarlett uses Ashley and still doesn't see anything wrong with his actions.

These two are so frustrating, urgh! Rhett claims to dislike Scarlett's southern belle antics yet encourages the same behavior in Bonnie. I'm actually enjoying Rhett struggle with trying to tame Bonnie. I can imagine that Scarlett has no energy to fight with a toddler. I love, love, love that she is pregnant!

One of them needs to start talking before this baby is born. Something needs to snap them out of their destructive habits towards each other. Rhett may be critical of Scarlett's parenting skills but Bonnie is acting like a little brat having spent the last six months being spoiled and pampered by her father. He needs to take a hard look at himself as well.