I don't think Wendy will have any trouble coming out to her family. What's manlier than liking women?

Love this story so much, it's actually so sad your almost finished season 1! But I am excited for Dreamscaperers and then onward to season 2!

Love all the red flag's with Bill's relationship with Evelyn.

(SCREAMS) LIKE IM ACTUALLY SCREAMING RIGHT NOW! NEXT CHAPTER IN TWO WEEKS FUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK YESSSS!

Okay...im calm lol
in any case, I absolutely love this story to bits and pieces! And I cannot wait for more to come! I can’t wait for Bill and Eve to meet and I can’t wait to see what Gideon and Bill’s relationship will be like, cuz, you know..
I just really hope that Bill doesn’t do something gross to Eve... That would fucking suck... but then again, it seems like she’s getting to him somewhat!
I WOULD TOTALLY wanna see a one-shot of a relationship between Wendy and Evie! That’s so
wholesome and we need gay content!

NEW CHAPTER! AND SOON DREAMSCAPERS!

Where 2 begin...still luving the conversations of Evie and Bill, shows how close the two have become in a short time...but makes me more curious about how Evelyn will react when she learns the truth about Bill! (and it looks like Human Bill form is once again foreshadowed! Please make happen!)

The stuff with Wendy is still good-especially since they re-address some of the new awkwardness or last time they talked...it is kind of sad, but still nice to hear that the two just wanna stay friends and nothing is gonna be awkward between them...and Evelyn is teased ruthlessly about a ne crush on Bill! OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH! Didn't expect that happen so quick!

Then her encounter with McGucket, awkward but still sweet-looks like the two are starting to get on slightly better terms (where as they have in common Bill has been in their heads!) McGucket even tries to warn Evie and they have a nice heart-to-heart (of sorts) before McGucket goes crazy again...poor guy. Looks like more foreshadowing for the Blind Eye Society!

And then the realization that Sophie is Lisa's decendant!? Oh my gosh-it's starting to come together! (Evie had hoped to re-meet or see Lisa's family or her in a sense...and now she has...). It's a whole new perspective on Sophie and I hope we see more of her soon! Still, I do understand Evie's wariness...I keep thinking Sophie will also be related to Alison...(but that's likely just speculation...)

Though this is another filler-I still enjoyed reading this chapter, it helps set up future events and gives more of a sneak peek-into Dreamscapers AND Gideon rises!

Please review soon! I really wanna see DREAMSCAPERS! (like mine and no one else's excitement wasn't obvious...anyway looking forward 2 next chapter...and hope ur doing well in the meantime...it is really hard 2 do things when u lost ur friend...take the time u need to heal...it's never easy when u lose someone close to u...) Take care of urself and hope 2 hear from u soon!

yay love reading this so much :3

YES! You're back! I was so happy to see this new chapter that I dropped what I was doing and read it in one go. I'm sorry to hear that your friend died, I'm sure it must be hard. I'll be praying for you! I also love how Evie is such a relatable character - she reminds me a lot of myself, and I can easily relate to how she reacts to certain situations. You're doing an amazing job! Have a great rest of your day! ~Cassie

Yeah the move went great! It’s gorgeous in Kentucky and I love the peace and quiet here! But i do have to say I loved this chapter! I really can’t wait for your next update! It’s got me thinking about how Bill will plan out his attack on Stan’s mind he could use it as an opportunity for more interactions with Evie in the mind scape, but I am worried about how Evie will react to the situation or more precisely Bill after this. I love that they finally got to a somewhat Stable relationship again and I’m anxiously waiting to see if Bill can keep mindscapers from ruining it. Also if you would like I’ve taken some pics of how beautiful it is in Kentucky on my Instagram so it’s lolitbird. I just posted an awesome sunset pic! XD can’t wait for your next update!

Great chapter as always! I’m sorry to hear that you’re struggling, but we all do, so don’t be hard on yourself. I’m glad that writing is helping you, though there’s no rush. Take the time you need to heal and move forward. But I’m happy you’re doing better!

I really liked the slow pace of this chapter, and Evie’s encounters with different people. Seeing her and Wendy interact is always a pleasure (I think they would be a cute couple, but honestly I value their friendship more; I’d happily read a story about them, but I prefer them as friends). And I’m glad she was honest with Wendy. It made them even better friends. Seeing poor McGucket go back and forth between sanity and insanity was so sad, but I applaud Evie for trying (and Bill for trying to be halfway decent in comforting her). I’m wondering what will happen when McGucket gets dragged into their adventures fully, and if it will change from the show. I’m also curious what will happen at the tea party when Evie goes, and how her possible new friendship will develop, but I have a feeling that’s a ways away maybe, with everything else that’s about to happen.

You can really feel Evie’s love for gravity falls in this chapter, which was very sweet. I’m sure she will rally to protect it in the future even more so than the twins.

I’m looking forward to what is coming! Bill is awful (that’s part of why we love him, though, and I love all of his snide comments), and I’m thrilled him and Evie will meet officially soon. I can’t wait to see how that turns out, and see where we’re going next. The interaction between them in this chapter was perfect.

Take care, and no rush on the next chapter, though of course I am excited to read it!

-Rei

Woo new chapter! Glad you liked the fanart!

Anyways, this was a nice slice of life thing, I happen to be very fond of stories with everyone knows everyone settings, it’s very homey and nice and to see you expand upon it was lovely!

Interesting that Ghost Lisa has family still, and that Sophie’s apart of it! Excited to see if the tea party ever happens :3

The Old Man McGucket scene was gold, loved how it was written and I could feel Evelyn’s hope for answers melting to disappointment as he ran off. I love Bill but my god tell her the truth man! It’s like ripping off a bandaid, a little sting but you get it over with nice and good.

The talk with Wendy I feel was important and nice, I also enjoyed Evelyn evaluating what she really feels for him, I be expecting a smooch before season one ends!

OOOH? A switch? I don’t have that much games on it but I simply adore Breath of the Wild, and Fire Emblem Three Houses—I hear Animal Crossing is good but I’m hesitant to try something so chill. I mean I like chill but...not THAT much chill but I love decorating things and cute animals so idk...

Finally, totally understand being emotionally tired and unwilling to write—the best thing to do is take a breather and get back to it when you’re ready; your health is important!

I didn’t mention you friend last chapter; but I’m sorry for you loss and pray you feel better soon.

Fantasy Fan OUT!

damn I’m sooooo ready for the next chapter. Evie is gonna be in for a rude awakening when she sees bill... yikes

AHHHH I HATE UUUU WTF I'M RIPPING MY HAIR OUT

THANKS YOU SO MUCH FOR THE CHAPTER~! I Can't Wait To Read Dreamscapers Pt.1~! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK~!

I liked it looking forward to the next chapter

I adore Bill and I love that he's with Evelyn all the time. I wonder if she's going to look him up in the journal next chapter.
I only found it a little odd that Bill's dialogue during the fight was so reactionary