Ha, that was so lovely. This triangle (kinda) thing and Jim coming back and so on.
I really like it story. Short and to the point!

really enjoyed this! it was a fun read

okay, so I'm going to start a fan club. what should your mascot be? ..

Dude these two are my ultimate otps i love them and ur story

Aww...tease...

cute!

Short and sweet! I ship them so hard, they're so cute. Good story

I liked this. I wish there was more Fuugen that was simply silly and sweet, and maybe a little citrusy.

Omg, Jin... Haha!
It's a good story to begin with, but that last moment made it even better. Good job for such a short snippet

yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees! otp! :D I really liked this! Cozy 3 Write another one!

So...sweet! Excellent writing of Fuu and Mugen, very in character. I think you could even make this a longer story if you wanted to. Thanks for sharing and keep writing!

Mugen's just the best; I like Fuu and Jin, too, but yano, there's just something about him.
Nice and short- good job!
Keep up the good work. :)
~WAC