Reviews for The tale of a Gaming smith
hillycube chapter 3 . 1/8
This is great. Actually enjoyed the first 3 chapters a lot. Would recommend.
Rathaloski Mozsko chapter 3 . 8/31/2019
Pls update
renextronex chapter 1 . 6/13/2019
two mistakes

a googolplex is a 1 followed by a googol of ceros, a googol is a 1 followed by 100 ceros

and she said "see you after another ninety decades" that's 900 years you know
MajorKO chapter 3 . 6/13/2019
It's good to see this new chapter. I can see as to why you might not like the latter half, but it's decent enough. It can definitely be worse, and I will admit that until 'Jaune' remembered the Gamer power, I had forgotten that it was a part of this in the first place. Speaking of which, it's pretty interesting that the gamer power is his semblance, and a nice way at that to limit the Gamer's op power and potential.
PasiveNox chapter 3 . 6/13/2019
its nice
kronos797 chapter 1 . 6/13/2019
Hold up. ninety DECADES. Do you maybe mean years. I mean thats 90% of a millennium. Thats a long time.
yesboss21 chapter 2 . 11/24/2018
Is he gonna learn to add runes which is powered by his aura AND is his semblance? And can his Self Defense weapon be an warhammer named and look like Ghal Maraz from warhammer game. And his runes can be the Dwarves (Not Dwarfs) of Warhammer Fantasy {i would advice reading the warhammer fanfic entitled "Rhunki" for how he made the weapons and etch the runes}
yesboss21 chapter 1 . 11/24/2018
certain Planeswalker (its ROB isnt it) "Oh, your an old soul. Been in almost every world to revive into. Aparrently your soul is even older then mine, not a bad run grampa" so there is a category of souls, what is it then the category of an Ancient Soul? Oh! And is there also a Primordial Soul? What about post-soul-being-created soul?
Alvelvnor chapter 2 . 11/23/2018
I like it, too many stories skip human development in favor of "player" development. I'm looking forward to more.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2018
Your spelling isn't exactly perfect, but I love the idea!
MarcusMebadd chapter 1 . 11/10/2018
so much easier to read, thank you. and very enjoyable. I look forward to seeing where you take this.
Artjom435 chapter 1 . 11/9/2018
Well I like it. I hope you will write a second chapter. I didn't read your first version but this one seems good to me.
MarcusMebadd chapter 1 . 10/17/2018
i want to read it but it gave me a migraine before I finished the first chapter. waaaaay too many commas. it made me have to reread half of it to make it make sense
PasiveNox chapter 2 . 6/1/2018
its nice
PasiveNox chapter 1 . 5/31/2018
hmmmmm nice
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