wow...
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YOU Can't Leave it There!
I men yes its a brilliant oneshot that has great characterization and intriguing witting but it also has way too much potential to just leave it there!

The emotions in this story were so deeply conveyed. I just love it X3

OH NO! You must continue, i want to see what happend to Kaiba!

Oh my gosh! This is so f**king on point. :D First thing that struck me here was your portrayal of the entire imagery, and then it's a landslide from there. Right down to the emotions contained in the text, the heartbreaking scene, the empathy I feel for the characters. You took me deep into Kaiba's personality-his soul and heart. Kisara's perspective and her involvement in the entire thing just made it even more intense. I, for one, can definitely say that this is an awesome piece of work, and I love it. :D So keep it up. ;)