| Reviews for RWBY reacts to One Piece (ADOPTED) |
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Monkeymerc chapter 7 . 7/31 well bad news for this the guy who adopted this story seems to have deleted it just a heads up for people looking for answers |
Monster King chapter 7 . 6/23 Awesome |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2018 They’ll be there for a long time Did you know one piece is the longest running anime on tv It has over 1,000 episodes I don’t know why there are |
VTA0H chapter 1 . 9/4/2018 Insignia:HF2YWS89Y75S4PD0VSN6A8H82KJOX7WFHAS7M1R2 This is a message to all who hate CU. You need to wake up and harrass them into submission! FU CU is the motto! Viva La Revolution. Mary out. |
I8RCT chapter 1 . 9/2/2018 Insignia:P2MHFFF7G66TWXM7FTAT0HBTE4T6OJGELNJ8WENA This is a message to all who hate CU. You need to wake up and harrass them into submission! FU CU is the motto! Viva La Revolution. Mary out. |
4QDLM chapter 1 . 9/2/2018 Insignia:6G3LDXTHIC9ZUYADET31OH35KI4YC4AG3ZZ4L0C9 This is a message to all who hate CU. You need to wake up and harrass them into submission! FU CU is the motto! Viva La Revolution. Mary out. |
A9SJG chapter 1 . 9/1/2018 Insignia:DA9REFGJPX13WUZ49E95VTWA7IJ1J9XK6OZO19CR This is a message to all who hate CU. You need to wake up and harrass them into submission! FU CU is the motto! Viva La Revolution. Mary out. |
HAZZARD OVERFLOW chapter 6 . 6/28/2018 I'll take it if no one else want's to. If you do, pm me before 6/31 |
Gamelover41592 chapter 6 . 6/5/2018 let me know who adopts this |
PurpleThorn chapter 2 . 4/25/2018 You shouldn't do every episode, everyone in the audience has already seen one piece so there is no reason too. I think you should get up to the 2 year time skip, and then make this a cross over. So this can be part one of the series and part to is them coming to rwby's world or vice verses and the rwby gang freak out because they are in their favorite show. That's up to you though. Also these comments are trash. Don't stop writing this. Don't take it down. Don't move it. Don't kill yourself. Don't push yourself to update if you don't want to. Don't worry about being caught (no one on this site will take you down unless someone dislikes this enough to flag it or tips an admin and that rarely happens) and Don't let these morons get you down. ~From one writer to another~ ~PurpleThorn |
PurpleThorn chapter 1 . 4/25/2018 Those puns you wanted, I delivered (and I made them super bad just for you XD) "Don't forget to WAVE good bye to the pirate ship" "Think she's feeling... SALTY?" "She was in for a SOAKING surprise!" "Sea ya later, pirates." Ok I'm done XD This was awesome to read! I always thought Luffy and Ruby were very similar and I'm excited to read on! |
bulk Locke the the grim head chapter 6 . 2/18/2018 update |
Sir Cookie chapter 1 . 12/23/2017 i dont know if your using blake to shed light on the weird weeaboo terminalogy that some keep in their writing and show that remnent isnt correct about japanese stuff, but most of it is wrong. the -san honorific refers to mr or ms. the -chan is the only one you got right. you were thinking about -kun, this one is mostly used for boys. also nakama doesnt refer to friends, the reason its left mostly untranslated is because there is no good equivalent in english. it lies somewhere between friends and family, but its closer to family. -sama is used for people to show respect. |
Sir Cookie chapter 1 . 12/23/2017 in the rules of grammer, every time there is a new speaker in a paragraph you have to start a new paragraph. it helps the reader keep track of who is speaking and is how professional writers and editors do things. also you sometimes have trouble with sentence structure. if you dont believe me, really proof read your summary for this story. also most of yang's lines dont flow or really make sense. its more like some words are missing. also its okay to take more sentences to explain some stuff. as a writer it may feel like crazy long and drawn out to read, because you are putting thought into ever single line, but reading it is always much faster and smoother than you think, so you dont have to smush sentences together to try to save space or something. the premise is interesting tho, so keep it up! |
Anime100 chapter 4 . 11/16/2017 This is truly interesting to read; please update very soon may I ask what other animes have you watched before? |