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![]() ![]() ![]() I think that he’ll is to good for Moldyshorts. Please update as soon as possible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry scared the crap out of Malfoy and his crew! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sora was surprised. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Staark can fall asleep anywhere! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The did was Sirius? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is going to be interesting, and that’s all I can really say about it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cool story so far! I really look forward to reading more! |
![]() ![]() This is a great story, and I think that you have done a good job of sticking with sapphiremoon's writing style. I know this is supposed to be focused on Harry's new family situation, but maybe you could put a few toshiro and gin moments/conversations in, and let's all see how long it'll take for poor little shiro-chan to attempt to freeze gin. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() i am liking this so far, but the grammar tho u have to fix it! u need to find a beta if u really r having trouble |
![]() ![]() ![]() you should continue! this is awesome! but you have some grammar errors and the like, if you have trouble spotting them, copy paste the entire chapter onto google translate, then listen to the errors and correct them hope this helps! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh god... Ulquiorra and Orihime... well at least Ichigo's free right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow something different. |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah! this is really cool! i cant wait for the next chapter :D |