Reviews for Horizon Breach
WolfyFenri chapter 25 . 2/27
B*tch.
WolfyFenri chapter 22 . 2/27
Wow, I just wrote 1k words fic of torturing her to 'death' using her own power. How wonderful. I am glad that the canon didn't show her in the last few volumes, though that wouldn't change my hatred toward her anyway.
WolfyFenri chapter 19 . 2/27
Yep, still hate her.
WolfyFenri chapter 18 . 2/27
You know, for some reason, as I read more of this, I get increasing dislike, even hatred to Plant Hwyaden.
I get it that they're the antagonist, but...why you didn't tell the reason behind their actions?
So far, I got the impression that they were just did all of it to make things difficulty for Akiba, in extension to Shiroe.
Which, in my opinion, feel really shallow. They didn't exactly in the best terms, but that didn't make the guys from Plant Hwyaden to be so... stupid, they know what they were doing, and I am certain that most higher-ups weren't exactly cooperating with the same interest in mind.
Also...Nureha.
I..I didn't know what to say. If you wanted the readers to hate her, then congratulations, Nureha had successfully become one of my most hated character.

P.S: I hope you make more Akiba-side, the direction of this story would going to take dark turn (you know, people being people, so it's kind of inevitable), since the Akiba-side story always brighten the situation.
Btw, I felt that the parents near obsession with getting their children to the school a bit...illogical. I don't know how it works in there, but with the situation their children currently in, even though it's ideal that they act normally, it...it isn't realistic.
WolfyFenri chapter 1 . 2/27
Wow. Just wow.
Adventurers finally find a way home.
You wouldn't believe how happy this chapter (1th) had made me. I actually squealed!
I hope there will be more fics like this in the future, because I think the canon will take a whiiiiiiileeeeee to get there.
ReplicatedReplicator chapter 30 . 2/14
It's awesome you're still active; I'm to this day rereading this fic every once in a while. No ideas on the cross though, besides the obvious SAO.
Dude chapter 30 . 2/2
SAO is the obvious choice, but idk of any other anime where there’s a black sword and a blue sword wielded by a guy in black :s
fractalman chapter 4 . 7/7/2019
Accidentally turn the city into a dungeon (well psuedo dungeon but whatevs). Must be tuesday.
Guest chapter 29 . 3/26/2017
this had been a great journey! though i wished the core log horizon members like shiroe, naotsugu, nyanta, and akatsuki would show up more. especially naotsugu :( he barely show up. but it's okay! well done!
Guesst chapter 1 . 3/12/2017
Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you so much for making this story exist. I love it to the ends of the Earth; it even has a similar feel to it as the original story. I'm glad this story has its place in the Log Horizon section and I'm so happy I got the chance to read it. You did very well writing an excellent story. I'm sorry that it felt like work to you; thank you for finishing it. I hope you have success in your future pursuits!
SirRealism chapter 29 . 2/9/2017
Neat story. Needs more Nyanta
Prince of Austria chapter 1 . 1/22/2017
Random dude from reddit coming from your shameless selfplug!
Chunq chapter 29 . 12/27/2016
It was a fun read.

The transhumanist stuff seriously surprised me as I didn't expect it at all going into LH fanfic, but that's ok.

Thanks for writing.
Korraganitar the NightShadow chapter 29 . 12/25/2016
That indicus would put the soviets and America in the same pack as the axis, much less that she would claim Andrew Jackson belongs with pol pot and hitler, shows just how little she understands history.
Mizu25 chapter 29 . 12/25/2016
there was still a thrill to her relationship with Shoryu she still hadn't gotten over.

with Shirou

that an individual or a group- not some a natural occurrence- caused it

not some sort of natural

and paralysing the with indecision because of their

them with

How she'd been to soft on her

too soft

and control, supported on each sides by sycophants and trust funds.

on both sides

The the fact remained that she had still, fucking, forgot.

The fact

The downside of springing this on me as a Christmas surprise, is that is still has errors for me to fix :P
Nice end to the story, and it's sweet Akatsuki got together with her Lord. Didn't see 'the world is a simulation' coming, though.
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