Such a wonderful story. The page shakes with Joe’s anger and complete frustration as his life spirals even further out of control. I loved the way you brought our favourite couple back from the edge. You are are an extremely talented writer, everything you write is superb.

I love everything you write.

It's a wonderful beginning, about moments in time the we the audience weren't privy too.

What a great story!
You built a magnificent story about an important part of PD2.
I'm waiting for more ...

Thank you so much
Maria

I imagine, no matter what feelings they experienced during those thirty days, they were passionate ones. I like that even in the midst of this maelstrom of emotion, you manage to add a touch of humor. (Ticking off on his fingers the people he'd been, well, ticking off. And I had to smile when Joseph the Insufferable Man did.) I also like how you show that they know each other so well...and love each other anyway.

If anyone can make decisions, it's Joe's queen. It was fun having him get angry at someone who roars louder than he does.

Wonderful! Loved it...please continue!

Nice, loved it.