Reviews for Shivers
ElealehBlue chapter 15 . 5/8/2018
Okay, I ADORE your explaination of Danielle! And, your Ghost Zone laws!
Also,... Eeeeep! Robin and Chopper are crewmembers! And, Luffy's a monkey! XD

And, don't worry about the birth certificate thing. I've lived in the U.S. my entire life, and even I'm not sure -_- I think it might actually be handled by the doctor who delivered the baby, though. (Since the doctor's office that delivered my Mom and her brothers put the wrong day on two of their birth certificates, and I think my grandparents had to go to the doctor to get fix it.)

I don't think Vlad was OOC. It seemed like the poor Fruitloop just gave up, and I think you prtrayed it really well :) And, I love the fact that the ghosts treasure their children that much W Mind if I borrow that sometime?

Anywho, God bless, happy two-year anniversary, and I can't wait to read more of your work :) - Ellie
AltMassITBC chapter 15 . 5/7/2018
Nice GZ laws. Would you mind if I steal them?
Invader Johnny chapter 15 . 5/7/2018
My favorite part is Danielle's sense of belonging, she deserves a family and she fits right in with the Fentons indeed.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
Randomly Talented chapter 14 . 4/22/2018
I friken love this story, Dani deserves all the love in the world and that's that.

Congratulations Jack, I friken love your character. A Best Dad.
ElealehBlue chapter 14 . 4/12/2018
Awwwww! Too sweet! I understand if you don't, but I really hope you do get insipred to write more for this fic. It's awesome! :))))
God bless! :) - Ellie
AltMassITBC chapter 14 . 4/7/2018
Fluff Sense? Too bad I don't have it. I have a Family Sense.
Great chapter 14 . 4/7/2018
Good fluffy goodness, a very good chapter. But I think that you should change the title, it doesn't fit with the chapter. Hope you make a chapter with Plasmius learning about this development. Looking forward to more!
islamy96 chapter 14 . 4/7/2018
the other possible to tie loose end is about vlad
Invader Johnny chapter 14 . 4/7/2018
Loved how Jack and Maddie were so quick to take in Danielle and assure her that she was not a failure and give her affection, something Plasmius never did.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
ElealehBlue chapter 13 . 4/5/2018
AWWWWWWWWWWW! Adorable! I can't wait for the next update! :)) God bless, happy Easter, and happy Danny-versary! :))
Anilime Ahsim chapter 13 . 4/3/2018
April 7
Also awesome though I prefer the daughter over sister but the delayed twin opening epic. You are making the twin thing work.
Very nice keep it up and yes they don’t have nearly enough Dani fics!
Invader Johnny chapter 13 . 4/3/2018
Well first meetings can be awkward, Danielle meeting the rest of the Fenton family brings out a lot of questions that are not only hard to answer but also unsure of what could happen next.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
Cyroclastic chapter 12 . 11/3/2017
omg the tiny community sounds too cute
also nice pun with the raven haired thing haha :)))
ElealehBlue chapter 12 . 11/3/2017
Awww! I love Frostbite! Hehe! And, I'm really beginning to love Raven XD
This chapter was so sweet! I can't wait for the next update!
God bless :) - Ellie
Invader Johnny chapter 12 . 11/2/2017
Well, at least after all the chaos, the day ended on a good note.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
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