Reviews for Right on Time
Guest chapter 9 . 7/18/2018
ugh this was such a good fic, hurt enough for it to be believable but then sliding in that sweet comfort at the end. wow, a real adult stepping in to help stan instead of drop kicking him into the abyss, i never thought i’d see the day. but seriously, great read, loved how you handled their emotions, a good stuff, great word flow and characters were all themselves but smarter this time. 10/10 would recommend
Miyu Hinamori chapter 4 . 7/2/2018
Those last pair of sentences was the final nail hammered into my heart, and broke it in two
Guest chapter 9 . 1/31/2018
This was an amazing piece of work. Everything felt real and well paced. You captured everyone's emotions and voices. I love the reality you explored and I'm glad I read this.
bluefrostyy chapter 6 . 12/30/2017
I am so fu***** in love with Sherman! Aaaahhhhhhh I want him as my big brother! (Sorry actual big brother xD)
bluefrostyy chapter 1 . 12/29/2017
This chapter alone broke my heart and crushed it with sadness and joy. (Why Sherman didnt help his baby brother irl T.T)
Phantomfray chapter 9 . 1/12/2017
This is beautiful, the serial killer conversation was pure gold. It would be really cool if Fiddleford showed up, like if he transferred colleges because there was no one at his old school who he could really talk science with or something, but this story follows the spirit of cannon beautifully. You handled the fight between the brothers well, it was long and a little messy (how they treated it based on their cannon personalities, not you writing) but I felt it was fair and realistic for both parties.
Whiteling chapter 4 . 10/23/2016
Good fic though Ford forgets one little detail... even if he did get into West Coast tech, did he honestly think Filbrick would allow Ford to continue on, upon realizing he wasn't making money on the majors he'd chosen?
Lunammoon chapter 9 . 8/21/2016
So. This getting a sequel involving Gravity Falls and Bill. Cuz it should. This is great.
badkidoh chapter 9 . 7/26/2016
Good chapter.
badkidoh chapter 8 . 7/26/2016
Great chapter.
k chapter 9 . 7/18/2016
I love Stan and Shermie teaming up on Ford. One has to wonder how he will explain that to Eric, and how convaulted it will get, but in a fun way I think.
Dip the Hashashin chapter 9 . 7/18/2016
dude, I absolutely loved their banter here throughout the chapter, especially that Stan and Shermie decide that Ford's roommate is a serial killer after Ford menyioned the (fake...?) skeleton in the closet. They even screamed! xD

Lookin forward to more :D
Haileyice7 chapter 9 . 7/17/2016
XD I can't! XD I can't many things right now! XD I can't stop laughing, I can't stop my sides from hurting from the laughter, and I can't stop saying that I can't! XD ... Also, I am currently imagining Eric as Dr. Drevis *cough* the father *cough* from Mad Father. XD
Judith Estelle chapter 9 . 7/17/2016
Okay, that last line hurt.
But nonetheless this was one of the cutest and in character fanfics I've read.
It's seriously adorable and I find it really easy to somehow relate.
Congratulations and thank you much for this story!
Brenne chapter 9 . 7/17/2016
Well! Looks like Bill lost his chance at getting to Stanford! He'll have to find some other sucker to fool! Great story! XD
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