Anddd dangit, I wish I could finish this story. It was so good and it's obviously well written and I'm sure it'd be a good story to read all the way through. But I must concede for myself, and stop here, as some stuff got too triggering for me, personally. I guess I can't handle the mental angst fest as well as I thought I could.

Anyhoo, I still like the first story in this trilogy, so thanks for the enjoyable read, at least!

Kudos!

The book choice is definitely worrying. Glad to see Cisco there for him though.

Most of the chapters I've wanted to leave a review but just don't quite know what to say other than this is very well written. It's good to see Iris and Caitlin supporting each other here.

I can't even imagine how difficult it must've been for Caitlin and the others to have to break his bones yet again. The other fic was horrifying, and yet believable that some factions would want to do that for 'progress' and this certainly seems to be amping up the emotional angst to go with that. It's painful to read but good at the same time.

Holy heck. The accuracy is fantastic. It's giving me major axiety though, so I have to bid this story adieu.

Wow! This is great! You write so well!

When he did his first riddle, "What has hands but can't clap." I thought he was talking about Barry! But a clock, wow. Who ever made that riddle, keep it up! Love the story so far. Keep on making things like these, they keep me entertained. xoxo 3

Be careful about things like content and legalities.

I know you are done with this story, but I would recommend a warning on this chapter

amazing, looking forward to reading part 3 :)

Oh I'm interested to see what vendetta Barry is like! I really can't imagine Barry going all Oliver and killing all his enemies but I guess when you've been pushed that far. Can't wait to read the beginning of part 3!

This was awsum...n I think he's gonna Time Travel? Yes? No? Can't tell? Thats okay...lol...thank you for an amazing story!

just got real. That was insane. Good writing.

No Barry! Don't go all crazy on us please! *sobs*

That surprisingly went better than I expected with Holland...Barry don't kill them,...but destroy them all! ...With a pan!